Sinister
By nyarlathotep
Description: (spoiler-free:) Gray, a young man who feels no emotions, seeks to uncover the reasons behind it and the cause of his mother's murder by the hands of his father.

At the writing of this post, it is 29 pages long. Rather than posting all of the back-pages here, I've decided just to upload it on DrunkDuck. Link below!

Sinister on DrunkDuck (Link goes to first page)

Not a huge fan of their reader, but whatever, it beats scrolling down on a forum to some degree.

Comments are very welcome, but I probably will not be going back and fixing things in previous pages, so I guess I'm more looking for things I can improve on rather than specific errors. Regardless, I'll gladly read whatever you've got to say.

On to new pages. 29!



Middle panel is a bit of a copout -it's unlikely that many private airports are using military-style hangars, but... didn't find any good reference pictures immediately, so I fell back on makin' shit up.

I love the way you drew those first two panels and the fourth one. You're starting to really get the hang of it, man.

yup good page

Thanks, guys =) I did end up with rather thick panel borders... which only now annoys me. Hm.

Yeah man I was gonna point out the bold panel borders, but otherwise the page layout is really good. My only beef is the last panel. I hate when people fill part of the page with text that could easily be art, but that's more of a pet peeve than anything. The rest of the comic won't load for me, so Iduno if you use captions or not but you really should.

Yeah, that part was a bit of a cop-out - sometimes I draw a blank on paneling things >_> What do you mean by captions?

Edit: Yeah, DrunkDuck is totally down right now. I also have it all on Photobucket... but that is basically the worst reading experience ever.

Edit2: Back up now.

Captions like text boxes for depicting thoughts.

Ah, yeah - normally I use the tried-and-true "fuzzy bubble" rather than a box, though.

Boxes are more economical and don't cover the art as much.

But whatever man it's your hot comic you do what you want.

Psh, you and your right-angle propaganda. I suppose if I had a page where I couldn't fit in a bubble without covering something up, then I'd use a rounded rectangle. Like boxes, but without those insidious angles...

So, page 30.

congrats on 30 pages

Thanks =) Guess I'm getting faster now, though whether that's due to being better or to actually working on it, who knows?

Regardless, untriginta:
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This here is the end of the first chapter, though that really means nothing

And, reposting for the new page, Sinister on DrunkDuck.

Nice! Very well thought out. I don't know where this could go but it should be good, nonetheless.

Page thirty is really strong. I like the background in the last panel. :)