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I think my works are worth $1, I give you the chance to increase the price!
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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:42 am 
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In anycase all forms are of equal value with pros and cons so definitely one cannot take this as a spoke because a spoke cannot be taken mathematically and poses a bias, in this case a bias towards realism (being center and all), unlike a continuum that levels them all to equal ground and can be located in a coordinate system.


I don't quite understand what point you are trying to make with this statement, but I'm not going to argue it further. Good luck with what you are trying to do.


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 2:06 pm 
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Thanks, I changed it because she shouldn't really be violent according to the story writer

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Thanks, the clothing creases may just be a side effect of myself being a fan of leaf/aquaplus illustrators.Misato Mitsumi, Tatsuki Amaduyu, Sakura Koharu, Kawata Hisashi...there are more that which I'm unable to find btw, all of them are moe silly goose/silly goose artists just so you know before actually search for them xD

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That may be possible because I tend to think like a robot anyway *kzt*
I don't think I'm professional since I don't get paid xD. You yourself have a dilemma right now ^___________^

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Thanks. About the head size, I think it's because I was trying to balance an SD from a slight chibi if you know what I mean. The hands in those two panels are overly simplefied as well...about the squarishness...probably because I was rushing it and that old style manifested...I used to not draw cheeks in my characters as a Tony Taka influence. >.....>


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:45 pm 
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hence obitual crow...
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Anyway straight to the point
I'm in dire need of opinion because this one needs to be finished now >....> and I can't decide full as to which one would work

Both are WIPs of essentially the same image however differing coloring style drastically changes the idea. Point is that this should work as a startup screen/screensaver for a computer shop and is intended to catch the attention of the viewer or anyone who happens to pass by...
A uses the palette given to me; colors are not entirely my choice thus it may look too psychedelic.
B is something that is easy to do (black with metallic sheen is easy) however it looks like an alien invasion image thing.

The idea should work for a computer shop and so please I will be happy to recieve even a one letter reply. A or B?

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:52 pm 
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Hmm... They both have their charms... I guess A.


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 5:04 pm 
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I really enjoy your stuff. so you use paint tool sai aswell huh?

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 5:20 pm 
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B is more aesthetically pleasing, but for the purpose of catching someone's attention, A works better.

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
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Ah yes thank you for the vote ^^

@fabiafidus
Thank you but you don't have a pick between A and B?

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Yes, thank you for the note...


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:18 pm 
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Yay, you posted again! To business, then:

A pops out more to me--more cheerful; more catchy. I'd vote that for your purposes.

B is nice too, but it wouldn't catch as much attention as A.


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:21 pm 
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I think B would be a tad bit better if you added a little more detail, it doesn't seem to appeal as much as A because A has more detail, I think.

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:22 am 
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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:01 am 
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I would say A, the colors seem to realy catch alot of attention.


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:07 pm 
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Which do you want to be the centre of attention? The girl or her surroundings?

A for the surroundings, B for the girl. But I don't think you need me to tell you that...

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:03 pm 
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B...just because it's better, and doesn't quite trick your eyes as much. For A I found my attention pointing at the little radar thing for some reason...

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:08 pm 
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A is attention-grabbing, but I'm not going to beat around the bush here: I think it's attention-grabbing because I hate the colors and it comes off as obnoxious. D: I'd suggest going with B, which is fairly eye-popping, but then to add some flourescent details in a warm color such as yellow to give it an extra boost.

Sorry to be so rash. :(

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary: Needs Reply ASAP
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I like B better. Its more ambient, and gives off the feeling that she's in some sort of watery cave, but still has that kind of technology! Its a surreal touch that makes me like it better than A.

But thats just my humble opinion.

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