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So, How am I doing?
Great! 6%  6%  [ 2 ]
Your good, but not the best 10%  10%  [ 3 ]
So-so, Your getting their. 77%  77%  [ 24 ]
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Id tell you too quit but it seems you wont. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/03/10 CHIDORI!!
PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:53 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/03/10 CHIDORI!!
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Now I just need to color it. Any critiqe?

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/03/10 CHIDORI!!
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The hand holding the chidori is good, but the hand holding the arm looks like the fingers start too close to the wrist. That's the mistake I make all the time. The face is too low, I think. He's kinda looking down, right? I think you should draw the eyes so that you can tell they're being viewed from above (if slightly). Same with the nose--not much you can do with the mouth on that.

EDIT: Whoops, forgot one. His right leg (our left)--either the leg is straight and too short or the knee is bent and doesn't look like it.


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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/03/10 CHIDORI!!
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On Sasuke's right shoulder (our left), I would suggest bringing that shoulder in a bit (towards his head) or at least to the right a little bit (Sasuke's left).

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/03/10 CHIDORI!!
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The hand holding the chidori is good, but the hand holding the arm looks like the fingers start too close to the wrist. That's the mistake I make all the time. The face is too low, I think. He's kinda looking down, right? I think you should draw the eyes so that you can tell they're being viewed from above (if slightly). Same with the nose--not much you can do with the mouth on that.

EDIT: Whoops, forgot one. His right leg (our left)--either the leg is straight and too short or the knee is bent and doesn't look like it.


Yeah, probablly. I agree. I'm not sure about the face though. But thanks for the crit.

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On Sasuke's right shoulder (our left), I would suggest bringing that shoulder in a bit (towards his head) or at least to the right a little bit (Sasuke's left).


Yeah.

Thanks for the critique you guys.

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Still working on colouring Sasuke, I've been busy with school and all...

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/10/10 Sketches
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/10/10 Sketches
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 9/19/10 Sasuke Finish
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Aww, 3 people have said I'm bad ... >.> Oh well. MUST GET BETTER!!

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More sketches. I feel like I should be doing something else ... Requests?

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: 9/21 Sketches & Request
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You're not that bad.. highly stylized though. Which can be a good thing, just don't forget to broaden your horizons :)

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: 9/21 Sketches & Request
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: 9/21 Sketches & Request
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: 9/21 Sketches & Request
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These are awesome.
I like the little sanji face lol

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: 9/21 Sketches & Request
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You're not that bad.. highly stylized though. Which can be a good thing, just don't forget to broaden your horizons :)

Yep, yep. Good advice, thanks :)

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No, I actually do my inking by hand.

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These are awesome.
I like the little sanji face lol

Thanks, I live how Sanji turned out too (I think you're the only one who noticed) :)

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: 9/21 Sketches & Request
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So, requests anybody? I'm not sure what to draw...

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art, C&C Very Appreciated: Requests?
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