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 Post subject: ProphetofTear's work Up for Critique
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:00 pm 
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Ok I was working on masking out shadows and highlights on a little robot guy. Please disregard the Mega Man color scheme it's just what I went with for figureing out the shadows and such.

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Please let me know if you see any problems so I can work on those points.


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 Post subject: Re: ProphetofTear's work Up for Critique
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:02 pm 
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hmm did you use mspaint? if so than righteous..

I think it's a pretty solid picture.. highly stylized though. I'd work on your line weights a bit to add some atmosphere..

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 Post subject: Re: ProphetofTear's work Up for Critique
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:30 pm 
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Actually drew it on paper then scanned it in. After scanning it was 4 times as large. So this is what it looks like after skrinking before smoothing out the lines. Honesty it's only like half done. Needs a lot more clean up to be finished but I have been having trouble with doing shading and highlights so I decided to add shading to a quick sketch I had done earlier. This seemed like the easiest one.


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 Post subject: Re: ProphetofTear's work Up for Critique
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 4:42 pm 
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i think the shading is fine.. you should just clean it up a bit ^.^

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Just a quick question. In the future would it be best to just post the "finished" pieces. Or are works in progress ok to?


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 Post subject: Re: ProphetofTear's work Up for Critique
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WIP's are ok if you're having problems.. That's what we're here for.. to help each other out ^.^

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