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 Post subject: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:45 am 
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So yeah, I tought that now that I joined the forum I might as well upload some stuff.
I use Paint tool SAI btw.

Pride (OC):
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Sloth (OC):
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They're pretty much both characters for my upcoming Manga, I'm working on a group picture right now, to get them all done.

Oh and that little Å in the left bottom of my Sloth drawing is what I will be using as a signature thing (:, I forgot to put it on Pride though.


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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:57 am 
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Creepy. Good colouring, but creepy.

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:39 am 
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Interesting themes. Nice colouring.

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:19 am 
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A thing about signatures. If you don't make it blend in well with your art you might as well just have your signature in the middle of a page. It just detracts from the drawing. Just to let you know for later use. :3

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:48 pm 
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Hey guys, great critics! LOL

Ok, so here I come.

The first picture have the following flaws: The pupil of the girl are look in different directions, the left pupil of the girl is slighty looking more to the ground that to front. And also the mayor mistake in here is the clothe, the right arm is thinner when the clothe appear, apparently she doesn't have an arm, and the drop of the clothe look bad, in the left arm of the girl, you can see how the lines of the clothe go in a diagonal line, when the gravity should pull the clothe to the ground.

The secon picture is way better than the first one, but the clothe still being a problem. You can see how the clothe doesn't have a volume in some parts and the cut of the skirt look bad, basically because in one side the skirt is longer than the other side, you could say is because the skirt is like that, the problem is that you have the drop looking like it should look like that, and is not prperly shadowed, also with the lines of the clothe you would think in one part that the clothe is following the silhouette (looking right side of the picture), because the lines converge in a point loooking like they are going to behind the girl, but no, is not following the silhoutte as you can see for her legs.


I think the paint is awesome, but you should look more the proportions and the clothe.

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:24 pm 
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O: the seven deadly sins? ,,
Nice colouring man, I like the colour palette on the first one, green+teal+read = win.

keep it up~

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
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Creepy is cool ^.^ I'd love to see that group picture =)

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
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That's some nice coloring.

however,the iris/pupil of Pride's eyes are different sizes (if asked which is the wrong size, i would be prone to say the left one is too big)

also, if it weren't for the ruffles at the hem (bottom) of her dress, the bottom left area of her dress would fade into the background because the blood stains are that dark. not sure if thats necessarily wrong, but kind of odd in my opinion.

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 3:42 pm 
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Nice shading ;) !

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:05 am 
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That seems awesome! I like the sloth picture more though, and I think that you should keep up with the good artwork!

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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 6:46 am 
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I like the second one - cool ~ ^-^


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 Post subject: Re: The Theatre of Pride Art
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 5:34 pm 
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O hi there!

ehm I'm sorry for not posting any new art after my first post in quite a while, but I had quite an art block(because of certain things), so I will show you some stuff I am working on right now.

First is a Ciel Phantomhive cosplay fanart. So I'm saying that I copydrew this!

This is what I have finished so far (after 2 days O_o, I'm so slow..), also you now know what half of my face looks like..
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I know.. the little I have is not much like the origional at all... but bear in mind that it is my first go at drawing something realistic like this...

Yeah, I love Phineas and Ferb (also copydrawn, I'm sorry, I haven't been very happy lately and my fantasy died along with my optimism):
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and here, something origional! I did this quite fast though, not satisfied at all..
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My deepest apologies for the terrible quality of my pictures, because my webcam isn't the best, and my scanner isn't big enough for A3 drawings..

And thanks for all the comments and critics you gave me, especially Error 404!


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