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For a guy who started drawing in 2007, am i doing good?
You're doing great 52%  52%  [ 13 ]
It's ok 36%  36%  [ 9 ]
.... 4%  4%  [ 1 ]
Meh... 4%  4%  [ 1 ]
This is bullshit 4%  4%  [ 1 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: GB silly goose
PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 7:12 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: GB silly goose
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:38 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Countryside - finished
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:14 am 
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Oops my bad, I meant to comment on those emotion practice GB drawings but I forgot xD
I love those man lol.
The bar one sort of reminds me of a really sketchy sorta detective scene...just by his clothes, plan on fixing that one up and coloring it at all?
And for the finished scenery one, it turned out nice, albeit a bit flat in some parts due to the coloring. But that background really makes it stand out. I also think it would look better if you took away some of the black lines and traded them for a darker green or brown or blue shade for a more natural look without putting too much attention to it (a low opacity would work). Anyway, another thing is I like how you bounced the light from the dimming sunset off the trees and other stuff, good stuff mang.

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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Countryside - finished
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The sky on this last one is great! Your lineart is becoming more detailed, but the textures in your digital painting aren't developing with it. Like Gunz mentioned, use harder shadows and try to use those shadows to create texture. Also try to avoid using the airbrush tool and instead blend manually.


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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Countryside - finished
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:31 am 
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GunZet: Thanks and you are right, he is a detective XD A former detective... I'm a little bit lazy, so i probably wont fix the countryside picture, but ill be sure to do it next time :D

Celestial-Fox: Yea, im not that good at colouring. Thanks!

Hotel dusk - Fan art!
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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:51 am 
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From what i can remember of your old work, you've improved a lot.
nice work. The top Hotel dusk picture is great.

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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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alright.

I've seen this shit for too long.

You have improved little, if not anything in the past 3 months I've been following you on this board.
I'm tired of it.

Your shit is getting tiring, Not the fact that you draw furries, it's just that sometime, some GODDAM TIME SOON, you need to get better. I know you're going at your own pace and everything and that's fine. But I want to see some ACTUAL improvement.

The stuff you make right now looks like the stuff you made late goddam december. I'm tired of it, and hopefully so are you

I know I'm prooooobably going to get banned from this post, but I just needed to say this. It's been tiring the shit outta me.


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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:40 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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Haha. Ha Hahaha.
That troll wasted his first post on insulting you. You should feel honored, Son.

I have no idea what he's talking about. You have improved SO much. Those last GB pieces were great. And silly goose anyone who still has a furry stigma. Seriously.

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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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You sure know how to make an entrance.

First post... Really?

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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:33 am 
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HardToExplain: How the silly goose could he be following me if this is his first post? <_>

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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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he could me a former user


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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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MConnaley is my best guess.

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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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Ah, you guys are getting back into the days before I was around.

Anyway, on topic: The Hotel Dusk picture with the use of tones was really nice, and some of those pictures up there, albeit sketchy, look to be almost professional. The coloring on that BG was good, too.

As for crits . . . hm. In the Hotel Dusk pic, the girl's shoulders look a little too sloped. If you raised them a bit they'd probably look better. I'm not entirely positive though. It's getting tough to critique nowadays.


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 Post subject: Re: Son44's Art Topic: Hotel Dusk + GB stoff
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Jake & CF: Yea, i cant remember MConnaley that well. Was he an ass as well? Actually i feel that mcluvvin's critic is sort of valid. I could have improved more <_<

Matt: Thanks for the critic. I have a minor "weakness" when it comes to the shoulders in profile. Im gonna see if i can sort it out this week. I hope you can continue to give me critic. I need all the help i can get XD

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