Mark of genius.

inorite.

NECROMANCY IS ALLOWED IN YOUR OWN THREAD, RIGHT?

So, yeah, I was looking through random word documents, found this, and decided I liked it enough to rez it.

HURRAH AND HURRAY.

Now you guys have all got to rez YOUR stories. <3

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Penny laughed. “God, he sounds just your type. Brazen.”
Ronnie grinned wickedly and leant against Penny’s garden wall, watching her friend struggle to unlock the front door. “Mmm, very much my type.” She fished her cigarette packet out of her pocket and looked at it speculatively, muttering darkly under her breath as she put it straight back unopened after a dirty look from Penny.
Eventually Penny managed to get the door open, a hefty kick unsticking it at the bottom where the wood swelled in winter. Or summer. Or any time there was weather.

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"H-Hi Penny." Matthew's halting voice down the line just serves to fan the flames of fury burning in the pit of Penny's stomach. “Are you okay?”
“No.”
“O-of course not,” Matthew murmurs miserably.
Despite herself, a flicker of pity leads Penny to ask, “You?”
“No.”
Silence falls as they both contemplate the reason for their mutual not-okay-ness. Penny stares at her knees, picking with her free hand at the fraying hem of her jumper, shoved on over her summer clothes. The jumper is at least four sizes too big, menswear from Sainsbury’s, several years past its best. It had been her father’s.
Eventually, Penny breaks the silence. “I didn’t see you at the funeral.”
“Didn’t know there was one. Or at least, I wasn’t told about it. Wasn’t invited.”
“Oh.”
“I never met her family, you know. Fuck, I never even met you.”
Penny pulls her legs up under her and crosses her arms over her knees. “No. You never met me.”
“She was always pretty cagey about it. Her life, her family, her friends.”
Penny closes her eyes, unsurprised to find herself crying again. “That’s Ronnie for you.”

I see this as a movie. A dirty, dark movie that I would buy.

This.

Sorry for the lateness, been meaning to read this properly for a while...

What you have here is a really intriguing, character-driven plotline, missy. As seems the common consensus, there just needs to be more of it. :3

Thank you so much <3

:D!

HEY LOOK- A POST.

Goshdarnitthatneverhappenshere.

Annnyway, this is not an update on the previous story.

BECAUSE- SHOCK- I am making it into a script! (Blame Seefy). :o! But yeah, that's all messy and in-production still.

UNTIL THEN- Two v. short stories that I wrote because I was suddenly inspired.

YAAAAAY, script! (I hate movie script formatting. Recently I've been going "AUUUGH!", quitting, then heading over to Scriptbuddy to do the work for me.) But it's fun once you just start and get over the format.

That first one was so good. But also sad. :( The descriptions were great, especially in the beginning.

And aww. I'd read a story based on the second.

Sooo, I'm kinda giving up on NaNo. I'm obscenely behind, and the pace at college has just upped so I barely have any free time D:

HOWEVER, I am trying to write at least once everyday, and one great way I love doing is flash fiction.

NEW STORY 'RELEASE' HERE

Please, C&C Crits and comments are very much appreciated and go to make me a better writer.

You also get paid in the form of karmic balance ;D

Zi! I missed your rpg writing awesomness so much! and now you've gotten even better. damn, you're way better than me...
Anyhoo, I still love the characterization, you are unfairly good at it. the way you write enviornments is getting really, really good, you feel like you're there. I also love the small details like the one about the door sticking and her playing with her clothes when shes on the phone. They all give a really strong bond between the reader and your characters. Even if you aren't doing it for NaNo you should still post the rest of this story when you get to it.

Augh, that was SO GOOD. SO GOOD. I wrote out something more comprehensive, but I'll have to get that to you tomorrow (perhaps in the morning?). <333


Edit: Okay, this came WAY later than I had hoped, because my scanner breadsticked on me for a few days. D|
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Omg where did you get that story from seefy? It's soo good :O did zi write it?

Yep, if you look at her posts above, they're in links. :)