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Evil_Cake
 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 35 May 29rd
PostPosted: Sun May 30, 2010 9:59 pm 
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gonna take me a while to draw each page
o well as long as u keep them coming

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 35 May 29rd
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Yeah, doing my best. In time-honored kinda-cop-out-but-kinda-not tradition: double page!

Pages 36-37

Perspective is a little off even after I adjusted stuff a lot but... y'know... it looked fine when I did the guidelines :P

Thanks for reading!

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pgs 36-37 June 10th
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It seems like trying to straighten out the arm when you did the folds was where you went wrong; The rest, perticularly the pistol hand, is good. :o

Also, "silly goose I DIDN'T ORDER A GUNSHOT WOUND! D:<"
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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pgs 36-37 June 10th
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Yeah, that's why I've never ordered room service. You just... you just never know.

The folds on her arm are definitely too one-dimensional, that's something I should work on in the future. Thanks for the comment!

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pgs 36-37 June 10th
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Yeah, so... 7:30-5 job = time-consuming. Finally finished this page, however.

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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how long does a page take u to do?

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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Evil_Cake wrote:
how long does a page take u to do?


It's hard to say, but my guess is about 8 hours on average. It took longer this time because I wasn't able to work in as concentrated a state as I would have liked, but it still basically just always takes a while.


@Bacon: Heh...yeah.

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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oic what part of making the page takes the longest for u?

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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Probably turning the rough sketch of what I want the page to look like into something that I can then ink over easily (basically, actually drawing it >_> ) - the composition, paneling, and inking/typesetting/toning all go pretty quickly.

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 38 July 15th
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Thanks, Renzo. Didn't respond earlier, due to my complete lack of something useful to contribute, but hey, now I have another page:

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Work still takes up a lot of my time... but at least I'm going somewhere, right? :P

Comments appreciated, but thanks most of all for reading!

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 39 August 8th
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The guy on the right side of the car in panel 3, his legs look off. IDK how, Im sorry. Other thsn that, it's all pretty good. I dont like the last panel, but thats just my taste, their nothing wrong with it.

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 39 August 8th
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I got to page 17 and really liked it. The art isn't my favorite personally, but there's nothing "wrong". You are good at dramatic panels.

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 Post subject: Re: Sinister - pg 39 August 8th
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Thanks for the comments, guys!

@Bacon: Yeah, I think I could have planned/sketched this page a bit better - unfortunately I sort of rushed that stage. Ironic, given that it took me like 3 weeks :P

@Fenn: Thanks! The art gets better as this goes on, since I've been drawing it now for over a year.

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