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So, How am I doing?
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated
PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:13 pm 
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I am no hand expert but think the palm is too wide. You also need to vary lineweight. The space between the fingers seem a little too far apart and even too. I've learn from art making things too symmetrical makes the drawing actually look fake.


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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated
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I am no hand expert but think the palm is too wide. You also need to vary lineweight. The space between the fingers seem a little too far apart and even too. I've learn from art making things too symmetrical makes the drawing actually look fake.


Yeah... It does look fake due to the symmetry. Im not sure about the width though, I think the pinky just throws the rest off. As for line weight, I agree. I push down too hard, so I have trouble verrying in thicness, but I have smaller nibbed pens, so maybe that'll help. Thanks for the critique ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated
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id say generally it looks nice , the main two problems are i feel some of the lines on the back of the palm could be simplified or drawn in a better way. that and the back of the palm itself seems a bit to short to me

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated
PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 10:07 am 
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Is that because of the way the arm comes out of it? And what do you mean by simplified? Thanks for the critique!

So, second concept art of the guy with the knife, his name is Shin ... I was trying to make him look a little older and more lax. I've decided to stop posting colored images till I get better at coloring, or till I get Manga Studio. Either way "whistles*

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated
PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:17 pm 
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Bumdy-Bump-Bump, it's a Sketch Dump ... :)

Just practicing shit. I have learned a lesson though, if I am going to ink, which I will, don't do a Dump on the back of another Dump.

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Both times, I cut off eyes crying ... Huh

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated
PostPosted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 9:00 am 
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So ... Another Sketch Dump ... I wont be updating for a while since Ill be in DC this week ... So uhmm ... Here

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I like how the fist turned out, everything else is kind of wacky

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 Post subject: Re: Bacons Art? C&C GREATLY Appreciated: OH GOD SKETCH DUMPs
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Uhhh ... Rock Lee from Naruto ... I had some sort of Art relapse or something ... lol. I think the arms and legs turned out well though

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 Post subject: Re: Bacons Art? C&C VERY Appreciated UPDATED 7/5/10
PostPosted: Sun Jul 11, 2010 10:53 pm 
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Sorry I was gone. I was in DC this week :)

Sooo. More Sketches, I messed up a bit all over the place, but Im definitely getting better. I think ... lol. Yes, no?

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As always, Crit is appreciated greatly :)

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 Post subject: Re: Bacons Art? C&C VERY Appreciated UPDATED 7/11/10
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Sooo. "Realistic" "Traditional" Art. Crit is in an unexplainable amount appreciated. I dont draw realistically often enough. And I need too.

Eggs with some weird cloth background. Done with Charcoal ... Uggh. The mess was horrible.

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A pear and some oranges. We had two light sources for this one. Blue Light, and "regular" White Light.

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I had a model! Well, I was in an art class, so I wasn't the only one, but whatever. I have really mixed feelings about this one. Its a little bit smudged ... I had to redo the face A LOT

... Hmmm

OK, so its too big. Please follow this link : /

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: REALISM! 7/12
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That's real clean for charcoal.

Not too shabby, man. Keep it up!

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: REALISM! 7/12
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I shall, thank you. Another Charcaol piece. Sadly, my art class is now over, so ... No more Charcoal :(

I do have bigger pieces from class, But Im going to go down to Kinko's or something before I put them up. I have no clue how to put them up...

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Yeah, so the bottom got cut off. My scanner is a bit too small to scan non 8x11's

Another sketch dump, nothing really of note on this one ... Im ashamed. theirs also not as much on it ... I used up to much space apparently

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: Charcoal! 7/1
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So ... Anatomy Study

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... Criticism please?

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: Charcoal! 7/1
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looks a little too manly for a chick

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: Charcoal! 7/1
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here is some reference for u

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: Charcoal! 7/1
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looks a little too manly for a chick


Yeah, thanks, thats what my dad said ...

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Uhh should I draw her then?

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