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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 11:33 am 
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OMG hey hey hey =D. I think that was it, I added it in.
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Lol nope I'm right handed. I wonder to. I just tried slanting to the right but the way I moved my hand felt unnatural or w/e. (idk if this has to do with anything but my right arm is twisted.I don't think I told anyone this lol. Like there's certain areas my hand can't go because of it. Like I can't do step 2 in the macarena
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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 12:35 pm 
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Well.. don't twist your arm man... turn your sketchbook XP

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:30 pm 
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I think the hips are the small in comparation to her shoulders in the last pic.

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 1:37 pm 
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AAHA I THOUGHT I ALREADY POSTED HERE D: < wth!

anyway, for the fiiirst post, my favourite was the guy in front of the star, and you've improved a buttload (:

and for this drawing, cool cool. I thing the crotch is a bit too low, so you should raise like a tiny bit lolol <__< I think the right foot should be face a bit more towards us since that pose looks a bit uncomfortable

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:23 pm 
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Oh you made him tiny :00

yeyy <3 look pretty cool

And yeah the crotch is the main problem. As I said before you need t define shapes more, which is why it's hard to crit.

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:17 pm 
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Argh, sorry for the late redline. It was done a while earlier, but things came up.
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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Pimp WIP
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:34 pm 
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Ego- Hahah alright. It isnt a big deal. I learned to work around it.
Frosty- Alright thanks. I lost the Sai file so I gave up on it.
Toasty- Lol really? damn because this next pic is the same thing. Well the pose. I suckkkk at poses DX. But I will get it eventually. Thank ya
Tetsu- Alright, I stare at girls crouches more if you instead on me doing so. *winks* Thanks lol.
Rei- HAh thanks man. Shit have I been doing shoulders wrong this whole time? I always do shoulders like this Dx. Really appreciate it! I really like the way you do eyes. I'm going somewhat learn how to do that but add my own stuff to it. I'm just letting you know in advance.


Small bump. WIP. I hate arms. I really do. I like the folds in this one, but if anyone sees anything wrong with it let me know. I don't like the hair, I'm going do something with that. Thanks for the comments and crits =)
Ignore abs please. Though I know someones going mention it anyways lol.. cuz every time I say ignore something, that's the main crit.
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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Random WIP
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:15 pm 
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ha noses and mouths and non-pointy feet
you have come a long way


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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Random WIP
PostPosted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:48 pm 
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Something you should keep in your style (cuz I like XD) is the separation between the eyes. You made a bigger separation than normal, and I like that. But you need to work more in the composition of the face and the body.

Do what I told you the other time, do a draw (with a pen) and think about it, and go changing and experimenting with the draw. You will have awful ends, but in some point you will learn how to do it right.

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Random WIP
PostPosted: Sun Apr 18, 2010 3:18 pm 
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Haha yeah thanks. I remember those MSN lessons and how you always got frustrated because idk what you were talking about. You've helped me a lot dude =)

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Your post made me draw one of things I'm about to post. Alright dude, I want to learn perspective so I'm going mess around with it. Thanks

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This is a previous picture. I basically just edited and lined it. I'm going try to learn how to color in sai.
I messed up the folds. I just put them in random places

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Re-done
PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 12:35 pm 
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Update

Collb with Toast(her's is on the left in case you couldn't tell)
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This was done a while back. I got some crits on DA so I tried to fix some like the leg. Though idk if it look any better. I didn't touch the hands since it was a pain in the ass.
Info- Time: No clue, Program: Paintool Sai, Other: Bamboo Tablet

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Sk8 Collb w/ Tzvety and other
PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 1:21 pm 
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Lol you're improving Shiny. Could maybe work on the overall flow of your characters though. Just a little.


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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Sk8 Collb w/ Tzvety and other
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How on EARTH did you just randomly level-up like that?! OTL

LOL, NOT LUPE! NOT THE LUPE SONG, NOOOOO! XD!


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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Sk8 Collb w/ Tzvety and other
PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 1:27 pm 
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He snuck into my house at night and stole some of my powers!

Damn it shiny, stay in IRVING!!

lol nah... good stuff man.. main crit, is the legs are WAY too thin.. beef em up a bit..they should be like, twice as thick as the arms..

I like the innocent facial expression ^.^

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 Post subject: Re: Shiny Art- Crits wanted: Sk8 Collb w/ Tzvety and other
PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 8:05 pm 
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I have a habit of replying late, even after reading this. I should reply asap D=.

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what you mean by overflow? Thanks buddy

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LOL lvl up? Mann I don't see it, and why do you say that? Lawl. AND I LOVE LUPE ;A; lol. Thank you.

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Rofl XD. Alright Idunno if I'mma go back and fix the picture. If I do, I'm most likely not going fix it. And thank you.


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