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Look through my works. How am I improving?
Perfect! I can't possibly say anything more then that. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Impressive. Your works are awsome! Please post more. 6%  6%  [ 1 ]
Decent. i see some flaws. But you are quite Good! 81%  81%  [ 13 ]
Bad. But keep going ;) 13%  13%  [ 2 ]
Worse.. But you seem to be able to improve. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Quit allready...you are hopeless! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:12 am 
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you mean like this?

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heh yeah. i know the anatomy on the first black hair sketch was wrong. i said it was rushed and therefore a rough drawing.

The flying paper think i showed in the first drawing of her, was a tip i got from an artist on youtube. when u are new, its great to locate the gravity, and thereby make a better gravity effect on the hair. thats why its gone now.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:20 am 
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Story follows .. dont cry :shock:

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:28 pm 
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Watch out for proportions.
At the moment, you make the head very big compared to the body and the hands and feet very small.

This should help with sizing.
http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guide-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442
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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:34 am 
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Watch out for proportions.
At the moment, you make the head very big compared to the body and the hands and feet very small.

This should help with sizing.
http://cedarseed.deviantart.com/art/Big-Guide-to-Drawing-the-Body-15014442
The start bit especially


It's exactly as Skunk said.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:26 pm 
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uhh. nice :) thanks for that guide. it would help alot!

hmm i guess i wont need to link this then .. but i spend time on it so i do:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CvmnL7_IbX8

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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Go to muscle charts before it's too late, man. Learning the muscular system and all that will help you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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Lol yea when I said to use a ref. Meant realistic one. But I do use anime anatomy refs from time to time.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 7:57 pm 
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Ive been sketching some dolls and drawing circles in the recent time.

i made a few drawings, but i think this one is worthy.

(I know the hands needs silly goose of a work.)

but i would like to hear your opinion about the body this time :)

another thing is i cant really get that naturely look in place.

GIEF FEEDBACK! :shock:

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:18 pm 
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your girl needs more hips or curve as it were. Also, the hiar looks pretty unrealistic. I suggest doing some hair studies. As for the arms, they are definitely too noodle like. If she lowered them,they would be too long for her body as well.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 3:31 am 
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http://whitehaiku.deviantart.com/art/Th ... l-18786922

This is a halfway decent hair tutorial that I think will help you. The hair on your characters doesn't seem natural because it doesn't have direction like hair does in RL. This tut does a good job of demonstrating what I mean.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 7:21 am 
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Woah. WOAH. That drawings is like....Your best I think. She needs more of a bigger hip on her left side.
the arms go down to your pockets, and not further. So therefore we made pocketses there for convenience.
Dude. Still cant get over the major improvement in proportions you just made....I know there are some flaws, but still. I want to see moar of this :D

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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woah.. man.. that is one long arm.. looks like if she let it hang by her side, it'd hit her knees >.< arms should come do the middle of the thigh the other arm looks ok though.. maybe the forearm is a little disproportionate... great deatails though and i applaud your practice with backgrounds and scenarios! >.<

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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thanks for all the feedback :3

i just scanned through the picture and had a damn of a laugh ..

try looking at her feets xD ull see what i mean. FAIL

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 10:40 am 
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i took the time to change the drawing abit:

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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Much better!!.. I didn't notice the backwards foot on the first >.<

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