whoops, forgot to explain...
anyone heard of bioterrorism? it's a neat concept. (though I'm probably evil just for saying that.) I'm already working on another story involving it.
I can't decide on a title help please?
I'm exhausted, I'm still sick. in fact I'm getting worse. if you don't see me around for a few days you'll know I've died. I want a solid gold casket, k?
bye now.

Really good! I loved it! But whats bioterrorism? And there was just one part that I would like to mention.




I don't have time to say much right now, so here's something real quick. In the second sentence you say that twice. there should be no comma after: because they tested their weapons on me. There should be a period after cannot be cured.

Sorry. I'll try to give more later.

thanks for the crit!
bioterrorism is a form of terrorism involving the intentional release of organic(bio) agents, ex. bacteria, viruses, toxins. so, purposely contaminating people with nasty illnesses. it's pretty creepy considering it's really hard to detect until symtoms start appearing, so a lot of people can get sick and die before anyone even knows what happened. it's not very widespread though.
/nerd signing off XD
I will work on that sentence though.