@Bacon Barbarian.....The building and the clouds both have wacky manga physics, though the houses would technically be quite short, they are just like the Tardis. It might look small but inside the house it is quite big lol and the cloud are, yeah, just crazy wacky manga physics, which I freakin' love lol.......

@Renzokuken...thanks but I almost murdered my sister when doing this....it can get very frustrating doing a lot of detail.

@neogenstru....It took my about 8-10 hours....I think, I usually cant remember how long drawings take me, I just know this one took awhile lol

10 Hours ... Dear sweet god ... Maybe you should cut down on the double pages. Their extravagant and very detailed, but dont feel pressured to do a lot of them

I think the shadows pop out the clouds pretty well ^^
Sick details man~ :3

wow man thats pretty intense lol I can barley work 2 hours D:

Finally drawn up page 8. Oh, and for those people who do read this, bear with me, there will be a fight scene soon. I'm pretty slow introducing things in the first chapter, it has always been how I write me stories. Any who, please enjoy page 8 and also....I just remembered lol...do u think I should write the dialogue or type the dialogue...it probably would be easier if I put up a poll, so ignore this and look at the poll....

Cool man. : )

Very nice. The mans legs look a little off in the 1st panel though, too me they look a tad too long

Awesome as usual well except for the chairs on pannel 7, they look a little too low.

Since I had to get my computer fixed I found myself doing two pages....I know it's incredible. First of all I want to say page 9 is what I call a dud page, it's riddled with mistakes, it's quite dull and I think me typing up the speech made it worse, oh and I f u cant read what it says in the speech bubbles tell me and I'll put up the script...
Page 10 on the other hand looks pretty good(In my opinion) of course there are mistakes in perspective and other stuff but its waaay better than page 9, and once again I think me typing it up kinda ruined it....any who please enjoy and please comment:):):):):):):)

Flows well, but Mombellies makes me want to laugh. Also the "Here you go hun" panel ... the woman looks really ... Kreepy.

I've gotta say, the only thing about this that I don't like is the font, but that's just a personal thing, so you shouldn't worry about it.

Page 11 and it has boobies...well really close up boobies lol.....so I decided to write the text instead of doing it on paint and I honestly think it looks better, cos' it's easier to read, don't you think?
Any way please enjoy page 11 and please comment:):):):):):):):)

sweet! 8D

*Ignores boobs*

Im not sure about the text. Normally, I'd say no. However, you have good handwriting, so do whatever you feel like.

You're pathetic, lol.

Awesome boobs, lol.