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Should I type or write the dialogue?
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 18 UP AND READY TO GO!!!)
PostPosted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 5:00 pm 
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The sound effect 'OPEN' seems a bit redundant. And not a sound effect. Same deal for 'GRAB'.


Lol....yeah, I get really lazy when it comes to sound effects....

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 18 UP AND READY TO GO!!!)
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I agree with Del. No sound effects are better than really bad ones. Unless you're going for comedic effect, never use sound effects that are descriptors like "grab." silly goose, even if you are being comedic it's probably a safer bet to not use a sound effect like that.

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 18 UP AND READY TO GO!!!)
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Well this is the last of my all ready drawn up pages....and now I have to go back to my working area and draw the rest.....huff..

Should say, that girl in the last panel is Teya(you know, the one with the giant boobs) I only changed her hair, cos at some angles she looked waaaay too much like Ryan....and I think ima stop doing Ryans shoes black, cos it really dont look good with the rest of his clothes being white.....anyway.....please enjoy Kreapers: Age of the Fallen:):):):):):)

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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Teya? From Yu-Gi-Oh? What?

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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And the girl from Yu-Gi-Oh is "Téa" not "Teya."

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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Teya? From Yu-Gi-Oh? What?


Yeah sorta....but i think i got it from the girl thats in Deep impact and Jurassic park 3...if u know who that is.....and its closest to the original way i had her name, which was Teagan...so yeah...

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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And the girl from Yu-Gi-Oh is "Téa" not "Teya."

I know, maybe he didn't.

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Teya? From Yu-Gi-Oh? What?


Yeah sorta....but i think i got it from the girl thats in Deep impact and Jurassic park 3...if u know who that is.....and its closest to the original way i had her name, which was Teagan...so yeah...


That was pages ago... What are you trying to say?

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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Kodos wrote:
And the girl from Yu-Gi-Oh is "Téa" not "Teya."

I know, maybe he didn't.

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Teya? From Yu-Gi-Oh? What?


Yeah sorta....but i think i got it from the girl thats in Deep impact and Jurassic park 3...if u know who that is.....and its closest to the original way i had her name, which was Teagan...so yeah...


That was pages ago... What are you trying to say?


Sorry....I thought u were saying did i get her name from that...my mistake lol

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!PAGE 19 UP B*TCHES!!!)
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From now on I'ma upload double pages...and here are the two newest pages and GORE!!!! One the first page panel 2 is shite and its a bit more sillier than I originally had it but I think its better and the second page is..........well GOREY!!!!
Now the story has began and the fight scene is on it's way.......about bloody time too.....

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!DOUBLE PAGES UP, 20 AND 21!!!)
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Aww year, jubblies and gore!

One thing I can say about the first panal on the first page - the teeth visible should probably be the top, not the bottom. Tim B^Uckley does this all the damn time, and while you're not a terrible hack like he is, the point remains - it's not how people look. When you speak it's generally your top, not bottom, teeth that are visible. It looks strange and awkward when the bottom are visible.

Or maybe I'm wrong? In which case disregard this, I suck silly goose.

Anyway, otherwise great expressions. I lack the knowledge of anatomy to provide much other input, sadly. :(

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!DOUBLE PAGES UP, 20 AND 21!!!)
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Meh, I'd disregard the teeth thing. If a mouth is only slightly open, and you'r going to show the inside of the mouth and not a shining wall of teeth, usually it is the bottom row.

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers:AOTF(!?!DOUBLE PAGES UP, 20 AND 21!!!)
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ya 2 pages at a time is better

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Blood and gore and guys galore. Always a good thing my friend, keep this up, I haven't been reading it lately lol.

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