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Should I type or write the dialogue?
Type 82%  82%  [ 9 ]
Hand Written 18%  18%  [ 2 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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Excellent work, but the anatomy of the characters needs work, especially in the face, proportionally. The eyes are too high up and the foreheads aren't large enough.


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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 15 & 16 UP!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
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your so fuckin' pro


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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:42 am 
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Oh c'mon what, Renzo? It's a great page but the incorrectness of that just bugs the crap out of me. I'm seeing the glaring misspelling more than I am the art!


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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
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it'd be easy to fix cause an E could fit there Easily

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(PAGE 17!!!!)
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Oh c'mon what, Renzo? It's a great page but the incorrectness of that just bugs the crap out of me. I'm seeing the glaring misspelling more than I am the art!


HAHAHAHAHA!

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 Post subject: Re: Kreapers(NEW PAGE 18 UP!!!!)
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