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So, How am I doing?
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Id tell you too quit but it seems you wont. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:45 am 
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Well since it's art, you can say: f*ck lucifer, f*ck my art teacher, I'm going to use some totally weird shading technique and it'd be fine. But in manga, it's generally a good idea what wherever you use shading lines it's either straight, or it follows the shape you're shading. Curved shading is generally a very dangerous business, using them in the wrong manner creates mindf*ck scenarios in which the shape created by the shading and the shap created by the lineart oppose each other.

But anyways, looking at that eye you shaded around, that looks a whole lot better than the curved off shading lines I see a lot from you.

As far as DA goes, if you make sure that you full view artwork gets resized to 900 pixels wide, then there should be no problem and it should correctly appear on the forum. Anything larger, and the forum will nag at you. Also make sure that you copy the IMAGE url, and not the page URL. So rightclick, save image URL, go to forum, paste, select. wrap [IMG] tags post and done.

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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You mean the eye toward the left and in the middle on the way down? If you do, I'll try and remember that.

Every once and a while, it wont let me post things smaller than 900x900 ... :/

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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Killer Bee from Naruto, I think he turned out pretty well.

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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If his right foot is pointing to the side, his toes shouldn't be facing us directly. I think they need to follow the direction of his feet more.

Other than that, pretty good. :) Your lineart is very clean.

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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If his right foot is pointing to the side, his toes shouldn't be facing us directly. I think they need to follow the direction of his feet more.

Other than that, pretty good. :) Your lineart is very clean.


Yeah ... His foot does look weird. Thanks for the compliment. I think that's the cleanest piece I've ever done :)

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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I'm not too crazy for Naruto, but I think its pretty good like Goggy said the toes on his right should face the direction his foots pointing.

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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is one of his shoulders broken?

Well, he looks cool, you might wanna try drawing from anatomical reference for awhile to make your characters look less cartoonish, but that'syour choice, does'nt mean killer bee does'nt look pretty cool.

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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I'm not too crazy for Naruto, but I think its pretty good like Goggy said the toes on his right should face the direction his foots pointing.


Yep. Cant disgree with you. Hehe

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is one of his shoulders broken?

Well, he looks cool, you might wanna try drawing from anatomical reference for awhile to make your characters look less cartoonish, but that'syour choice, does'nt mean killer bee does'nt look pretty cool.


Yeah ... I had a weird reference, I think it's suppose to be muscle >.>

Yeah, I know draw realistically.

Doesn't not does'nt ... Sorry, that was bugging me ...

Some concept art ... I know it's rough, but bear with me.

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He's the main character for a Fantasy running around in my head ... His name's either Kiro, or Carvan. I think he looks a little too old for the Shonen market though.

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A planned cover for a One Shot I was thinking of doing ... (and still am) It's creepy, I know.]

C&C is appreciated more than ever :)

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/30/10 Im Al
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Some Constructive feedback:
In manga, eyes are extremely important. Your way is fine, but manga usually deals with more detailed eyes. It seems like you avoid eyes in some drawings.
Female anatomy in manga is basically keep everything slim, and lots of curves/rounded limbs or body parts. Males are usually more angular and wide.
Idiosyncrasy is key. Next time you go out, watch people. Look at the folds on their clothes, facial differences and body shape. The way someone's legs move while riding or bike, or how their hair looks. Pay attention to real life things carefully, and little things people do to display emotion. This will develop into many needed art tools. Just don't look to closely, as sometimes women will think you are checking them out and that can lead to an awkward situation. LOL.
Overall, your drawings have good potential. I'm no mangaka, but if you keep it up I think you will be able to do something with your talent. Good luck and good night. XD

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/30/10 Im Al
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Sorry for not responding sooner, but I had no pictures to post, my scanner broke :/

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Some Constructive feedback:
In manga, eyes are extremely important. Your way is fine, but manga usually deals with more detailed eyes. It seems like you avoid eyes in some drawings.


Hmmm. I dont think I've been avoiding eyes, but yeah, I like them a little simpler. The people who I like the styles of most have pretty simple eyes. Just one shine. Then again, I've been told to avoid shines...

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Female anatomy in manga is basically keep everything slim, and lots of curves/rounded limbs or body parts. Males are usually more angular and wide.


I've noticed, people aren't built like the average bear are they?

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Idiosyncrasy is key. Next time you go out, watch people. Look at the folds on their clothes, facial differences and body shape. The way someone's legs move while riding or bike, or how their hair looks. Pay attention to real life things carefully, and little things people do to display emotion. This will develop into many needed art tools. Just don't look to closely, as sometimes women will think you are checking them out and that can lead to an awkward situation. LOL.


lol. Noted. But that means I need to go outside more :/

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Overall, your drawings have good potential. I'm no mangaka, but if you keep it up I think you will be able to do something with your talent. Good luck and good night. XD


Thanks!!

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This kind of turned into my summer project. I did it on Bristol and used a lightboard to go over my initial skecth. Now I need to colour it...

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 8/09/10 "Proj
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I thought I'd show you guys something. My first ever serious drawing rom when I was a 10 year old.

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It got me runner up to state in the 4H fair in the drawing catergory. Ahh, memories.

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 8/10/10 Picture from
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Luffy drawing kicks ass!

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lol. Thanks. Glad you like it.

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Becuase I need to work on drawing the back

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated: 8/11/10 The Back
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