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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: Charcoal! 7/1
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/15/10
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/15/10
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More anatomy study >.>

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/16/10
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cuz theres too much shading, but the anatomy has improved

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/16/10
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Sad, I know. But I have fond memories of that series. And for some reason, it wont show up, so here's the link: http://baconboy914.deviantart.com/art/R ... -171839385

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I never liked the manga so much, but Kaiba was kick-ass ...

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2 More Sketch Dumps. Its midnight though, so I should be asleep. Dont tell my dad ;)

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I dont know why the later is post-able, I guess it's to big, though dA says the dimensions are only 411x476 ... Hmmm

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 POKEM
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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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Why do you need a new site for this? DeviantArt does the job well enough, no?

Anyways, when you shade, try making straight uniform lines. You, like I did at some point in the past, have the tendency to round off your lines and quickly back up for the next one (look at the shading on the face and you'll see what I mean).

Next up is the thickness of the eye lines/eyelashes. Most of your eyelashes are drawn pretty thin, don't be afraid to accentuate them a little, even more so in the case of women. Don't go overboard though like you did with the eye in the middle.

Tears unfortunately don't run like that, they pile up on the lower eyelid and then drizzle from either corner of the eye.

Your hands are unrealistic because of their bends. Try thinking of fingers as multiple straight components (cylinders or boxes) with smooth lines connecting them, rather as one flowing segment. Following up on that, try lightly sketching the bones of the hand in the post that you want, and then use your knowledge of anatomy to smooth it out, add wrinkles and bumps of muscle.

The shading on the boot is very good, no problems there.

Eyes (again), when they frown (upper left) they cause wrinkling of the skin, try adding some more lines and accompanying shading to hint at this.

The nose, well that's a stylistic preference so I won't comment on that.
The mouth isn't my cup of tea and whilst it looks all right, it still looks off to me (perhaps due to the lack of wrinkling).
And I'm not going to even try and understand what it is you drew in the upper right corner (some kind of eye with the capillaries clearly visible?)

Sorry if my crit seems harsh and to the point, but I simply want to get you to the next level.
(and if you think it's harsh, then you're really soft, toughen up or you won't survive the internet :P )

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 Post subject: Re: Bacon's Art? C&C Very Appreciated UPDATED: 7/23/10 Sketc
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Why do you need a new site for this? DeviantArt does the job well enough, no?

Anyways, when you shade, try making straight uniform lines. You, like I did at some point in the past, have the tendency to round off your lines and quickly back up for the next one (look at the shading on the face and you'll see what I mean).

Next up is the thickness of the eye lines/eyelashes. Most of your eyelashes are drawn pretty thin, don't be afraid to accentuate them a little, even more so in the case of women. Don't go overboard though like you did with the eye in the middle.

Tears unfortunately don't run like that, they pile up on the lower eyelid and then drizzle from either corner of the eye.

Your hands are unrealistic because of their bends. Try thinking of fingers as multiple straight components (cylinders or boxes) with smooth lines connecting them, rather as one flowing segment. Following up on that, try lightly sketching the bones of the hand in the post that you want, and then use your knowledge of anatomy to smooth it out, add wrinkles and bumps of muscle.

The shading on the boot is very good, no problems there.

Eyes (again), when they frown (upper left) they cause wrinkling of the skin, try adding some more lines and accompanying shading to hint at this.

The nose, well that's a stylistic preference so I won't comment on that.
The mouth isn't my cup of tea and whilst it looks all right, it still looks off to me (perhaps due to the lack of wrinkling).
And I'm not going to even try and understand what it is you drew in the upper right corner (some kind of eye with the capillaries clearly visible?)

Sorry if my crit seems harsh and to the point, but I simply want to get you to the next level.
(and if you think it's harsh, then you're really soft, toughen up or you won't survive the internet :P )


WAAAAH!!! Jk. Yar, hard crit is good crit. As long as you dont say, "You suck, suck it up and stop" but thats not really crit. As to the bending of the lines when it's shading ... I've been told by my art teacher that they should. Convex lines and all. So ... Yeah ... Must other things I get your point. The reason I was saying dA is bad is because it wont let me post images sometimes ... Or is that the forum its self?

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Concept art for the new idea running around in my head. He looks to old IMO. I was going for 18-ish, but he looks like 24 or something.

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