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 Post subject: FlamingPencil's (if you can call this) art
PostPosted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 8:03 pm 
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Well It has been a while since I've shown mt any of my stuff, but I'm back for your critique :)

http://flaming-pencil.deviantart.com/

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:29 pm 
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=o interesting pictures, the second one reminds me of Neku from The World Ends With You.I like the second last one. I suggest working on anatomy and foreshortening (two things which Im bad at xD)


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 Post subject: Re: FlamingPencil's (if you can call this) art
PostPosted: Fri Jun 18, 2010 10:43 pm 
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woah you got some technical improvement since I was gone =D I love that demon character, hes so stylish o.o

But his head is too small style wise, and the arm too lonng and too big.

Watching out with the size of stuff might make everything look better.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:57 am 
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woah your awesome at backgrounds.
but sometimes you have a tendancy to draw heads to small, maybe watch out for that

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 Post subject: Re: FlamingPencil's (if you can call this) art
PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 2:27 pm 
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@ all Sorry I've not updated recently :P

@Grinmnismal I'm really glad you like them :D
@Testu Thanks bro! That means alot coming from you :P anatomy and proportion study is on the way Dx
@Burnzeh Haha I thought backgrounds were my weakpoint :P I'll clean up my proportions along with my anatomy now that I have a good book!

Ssso here's the highlights of the past few months xD

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They do have souls :P
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Iunno I don't like how boring the first few pages are gonna be, I'll be restarting again xD
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An animation WIP I have like 3 frames done, working on this between projects
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Another character in my manga :P
it says...
"You drained THE BLOOD!!!???!!!"
-Always with food or bones
-Youngest of the group
-Fun loving
-Cannibalistic (affects fighting)
-Not hungry when feeling down
-Scarf=Napkin
-Anchors food(people) to ground

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 Post subject: Re: FlamingPencil's (if you can call this) art
PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 11:58 pm 
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Oh yeah! Thats call improvement since last time i've seen your drawings , keep working! And don't forget best way to improve is to study reality :)

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:55 pm 
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Just a thought, but you might want to try varying the line-width a little more on the background buildings. You're already varying the lines to good effect on your characters, and I can understand that you'd want them to be the centre of attention, but it would make the buildings much more interesting (and give them more depth) if you did the same with them.

This probably isn't the best example, but I think the heavy outlines really give the buildings more impact:

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 Post subject: Re: FlamingPencil's (if you can call this) art
PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:07 pm 
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good stuff.. your colors are nice and crisp and work well together, your lines are pretty good, though Gaff's advice wouldn't be a bad tweak. Good stuff.. hope to see more :)

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