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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:20 pm 
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Thanks, man.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:28 pm 
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I have to agree with Matt. (when don't I?)
Overall a good drawing. It doesn't necessarily need eyelashes if you want your character to have that trait. What I mean by that is eyelashes add a feminism effect, so unless your character is sort of masculine, or a tomboy, I suggest adding them. Also, the area where the cheekbone meets the jaw is very angular, which also is a masculine trait. If you want it to come off more feminine make it rounded or a soft curve or angle. (I might me wrong if you wanted your character to appear that way) Since this was made from pencil, I can't really criticize the lineart other than maybe follow along with what Matt said. (Sorry XD) Overall though, this picture is well done. Possibly your best so far.

(Also, although perspective can create this situation sometimes, the left iris seems oval and right one circular, which can make the eye look odd.)

Hope I helped, good luck and keep up the good work. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:33 pm 
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I'm terrible with perspective, and thought that it was supposed to be a bit of an oval. Well the jaw... I don't know, I could never really get it right, so I just drew it that way. I figured that I'd better on my next work, and I intend on doing so. Thank you.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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I tried to write a comment explaining perspective but it's too confusing. *Sad face*
Don't get that last comment wrong, this drawing is good.

(Gah then I tried rewriting this comment explaining how I have OCD and was a perfectionist but somehow it sounded odd...) Anyways just keep drawing and practice often and you'll notice these small things and correct them right away. XD

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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Well, I'll do better with the shading on the next piece.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((Shinji Ikari pic))
PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:13 pm 
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I don't see that much wrong with that drawing except that maybe the jawline isn't symmetrical (it sticks out a tiny bit on the right side) and the ears are a bit big. It looks like you are starting to develop a style (even if these are reffed I can tell it's your drawing) and although it may be simplistic, it looks good.

Keep drawing, I am intrigued to see what you draw next. C:

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((Shinji Ikari pic))
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((Updated, need crits))
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((Updated, need crits))
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soooo are all of these your art?


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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((Updated, need crits))
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On the GB uploads, just the Merbabe, Vampire babe, and Poison ivy. The rest are mine.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((Updated, need crits))
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Good Job Liebe! You improved allot. Just be more careful with body anatomy and colors :D. Keep going man. looking foward to more of your stuff.

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