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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art
PostPosted: Sun May 23, 2010 12:35 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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Faces. Work on them. Eyes are to big and oddly placed.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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You need to work more on your anatomy, try to draw from references like photos or an anatomy book. Posemaniacs, http://www.posemaniacs.com/ , is a good site to practice from.


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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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Like Vinyafod said, you just need to work on your anatomy a bit. Here are some more tutorials that you might find useful.

The Big Guide to Drawing the Body
IFX - Strike a Pose
Fellas Tutorial
Ladies Tutorial
How to draw Manga: Females

Also I would suggest slapping some [ img ] tags around your links. A lot of people are lazy, so the easier you make it for them to view your images the more likely people will comment and crit your pics, just saying.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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Really? I thought I had made some progress Anatomy wise, well, I'll work on that, than you for the crits dudes. As for faces, they're a little difficult for me, but I'll work on that, too, thank you.

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can't see thery much of it....are those mountains???

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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Yeah, sorry 'bout that, I didn't have a scanner at the time.

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Darkening your picture is just a matter of putting more pressure on the pencil. When drawing mountain ranges use more jagged lines.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art (Please crit)
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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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That last one's pretty good. You referenced it?

Mmkay. Critiques . . .

While the overall picture looks very good, the lines are still a bit sketchy. Almost unavoidable with a pencil, though. Do you ever ink stuff?

It might just be a style thing, but I think the eyelashes (upper and lower lines, not necessarily lashes) could use a bit of thickening. This example is a pretty extreme way of demonstrating that, but you can play around with it.

When you shade stuff, try to make your strokes more consistent--like, all of them going the same way, all the same tone.

Last thing I see: the outline of the hair could use some defining. Usually, if you define it lightly when you start, chances are you're gonna have to redefine it once you've got all your shading done.


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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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That last one's pretty good. You referenced it?

Mmkay. Critiques . . .

While the overall picture looks very good, the lines are still a bit sketchy. Almost unavoidable with a pencil, though. Do you ever ink stuff?

It might just be a style thing, but I think the eyelashes (upper and lower lines, not necessarily lashes) could use a bit of thickening. This example is a pretty extreme way of demonstrating that, but you can play around with it.

When you shade stuff, try to make your strokes more consistent--like, all of them going the same way, all the same tone.

Last thing I see: the outline of the hair could use some defining. Usually, if you define it lightly when you start, chances are you're gonna have to redefine it once you've got all your shading done.



Yes, I used a reference. Image This is it.

No, I feel if I tried, I might silly goose it up badly. As for the lines, well, I kept forgetting to sharpen my pencil, so that might be the cause, I'm not sure, though.

Well, that's another thing I thought I'd silly goose up badly, eyelashes, didn't want her to come out, well, too made up.

Well, as you know, shading can be tiresome, and I meant to do a really good job, but I got really impatient with it, so I shaded as fast as possible to get it done. Which lead to my last mistake.

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 Post subject: Re: Liebe's art ((New addition!!!))
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This is pretty, good!!! There's a good variation of shading for her clothes. I'd say it could be a lot cleaner, particularly the hair. Like Matt said, it needs so redefinition on the hair. Basically, it needs quite a lot of cleaning. It shouldn't take too long.

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