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How am I doing?
Really good. 20%  20%  [ 7 ]
Good. 51%  51%  [ 18 ]
OK. 20%  20%  [ 7 ]
Bad. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Awful...Give up. NOW! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Don't make me voice my opinion....(It's BS) 9%  9%  [ 3 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:05 pm 
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well holy shit ther ren, holy fucking shit

Your characters can be so bland sometimes, it's not even funny, I mean they look fucking beautiful, but God.

The detail is become fan fucking tastic really, the folds and the hair, but again, bland is a silly goose, we all get it sometimes. tough shit.

the manga couldn't hurt to be a bit more goddam original, same scenario, same wordage, I mean shit. Not saying the artwork is bad so don't be silly goose to me about it, just work harder with some more original writing or some shit.

summary of all this hog banging pile of words
you're good, be more original with your stories, and try to make sure you seperate your characters looks more

hate me if you want, but that's what I truelly think of your goddam art, tough sh.t


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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No kidding, that guy is a dingo

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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Mcluvinnn....

Lets see what YOU can do, before you Crit other people like this.
I mean seriously. That whole post was not needed.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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Lets see what YOU can do, before you Crit other people like this.
I mean seriously. That whole post was not needed.


And even if he is good, he shouldn't do that. Ignore him Renzo

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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I bet he's a wannabe troll. But srsly. No one trolls like BB.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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Quiet you...

Anyway, on topic: You've gotten a lot better since 08/09, though for the picture of Kain, since it's kind of zoomed out, her(?) face just looks really vainy. Kind of like Byakugan. Does this post make any sense?

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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He's supposed to have them...for this picture.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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Dude, if you were drawing like me you'd be doin' badly. You're drawing just fine.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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I know, I'm just saying it looks a lot like Byakugan.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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I'm saying you're drawing just fine, you could improve, but you're drawing just fine.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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I agree with Liebe, but still you are talented; a lot better than me. XD

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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You fixed your chin problem!!! W00T! :D Very very good to see.

You are also really good at drawing flowers. The ones with flowers are my favorites so far.


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
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Everyone regarding the Mcluvinnn thing: It's cool. He put it a bit brutally, but in a way he's right. XD

But anyway, that was a while back. Now for individuals.

Liebe:
Oh right. Thanks. =]

Ozza: Thank you, lol. I'm sure it's nothing that some practice won't fix.

Rei: Thank ye, kindly. It took me a while but yeah, they are, for now at least. We'll see DX

Been busy with college so that's why it's taken a while to update. And it'll most likely be like that until

First up is some practice:

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Practice, again.

Also, a random bit of Train. (from Vol. 12)

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.... Unoriginality sucks.

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Yeah, Tearju and a random waistband sketch.

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Eyes...
From the top (L to R): Nameless female, Kain, Rosa, Ayane, Yoshihiko, Maya, King, Oni eyes, May, Sayama, Ichigo, Eve, Yoshihiko (enraged)

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My Male characters (favourite).

Top row: Kain and Yoshihiko
Bottom row: Sora & Rei.

They look alike..OTL

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Guess who.
Hehehe....

My mind is wacky....

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Thought of this guy months ago but finally got a look for him and a weapon, lol.

Valen/ Big V. in Reaper mode with Cerberus II Guardian.

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Train.

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School & College stuff:


Just some stuff from College. It was rushed 'coz I had only two hours to do it in.... -.-'
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Still Life work from school.


Took forever... >_>'

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I tried...

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Cover page.
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Did this in Art like a year ago....

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Enjoy, folks.

Gotta work on something for Seiko, now. That Train pic is the most recent, BTW.

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