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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: Quick, huh? (14)
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:52 pm 
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Hmm....This one's alright, I guess.
Rain is very easy, surprisingly.
But I aint all that good.

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=/ It needs work.
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Obviously it's a WIP.
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Renzokuken121 has 2,534 pageviews total and their 116 deviations were viewed 2,011 times. Renzokuken121 watches 608 people, while 66 people watch Renzokuken121.

Overall, their deviations received 284 comments and were added to deviants' favourites 121 times, while Renzokuken121 commented 946 times, making about 3.46 comments per day since Renzokuken121 joined DA. This means that Renzokuken121 gave 33 comments for every 10 that Renzokuken121 received.

Their deviation with the most comments is Rage. Power. Corruption. with 22 comments, while their most favourited one is Release the Beasts, with 10 favourites. Their most viewed deviation is Huh? with 70 views.

4 favourites were given for every 10 comments.

Every 2.3 days Renzokuken121 uploads a new deviation, and it's usually on a Monday, with 31 (27%) of their deviations.

Their busiest month was July 2010 with 35 (30%) of their deviations.

The majority of their deviations are uploaded to the cartoons gallery (109), while their favourite category was cartoons > drawings with 105 deviations.

Comments per deviation: 2.44
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: Sequential needs practice
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:59 pm 
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I like how you've been practicing a lot with comics! I would suggest not doing so many close-ups, though, because it's really hard to follow. Have you read any comics by Vyrl on DA? She does stuff in the fantasy genre, and you might be interested in how her paneling looks.


Oh, and that Gotcha panel is super cool.


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: Sequential needs practice
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:01 pm 
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Why are you posting your dA details?

Those panels look really, really good. Keep up the good work Renzo. I also think the rain looks fine, though that panel looks like it had bad lining.

Now all you need to do is get a fixed scanner.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: Sequential needs practice
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:38 pm 
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I'm really liking how your pages come out. Like Seef said though, less closeups! It's like reading a 4koma the way it is.

You like Black Cat, right? (The manga, I'm assuming.) The paneling combined with the different camera angles and shots in there was super, and so was Rurouni Kenshin. (Black Cat was a little better in my opinion. A little easier to follow.)

A little tip based off of personal preference: Don't dedicate one panel to show a small portion of a blade that we already know is there. You haven't done it, but I got SO annoyed when I was reading Bleach, because that's how they did most of the swordfights! The anime was the exact same thing. If you wanna show a guy swinging a sword, show the full body shot with some motion lines. Or something.

Sorry. That last paragraph was mainly a rant.


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: PracticePracticePractice- (Kain pg
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:52 pm 
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All I need is here!!! Damn you're efficient. Thanks a bunch. I'll look into this in more detail shortly.
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Oh, and that Gotcha panel is super cool.


Thank you. It was the quickest to draw.

BB: I post them 'coz I wanna! Got a problem?!!! Huh?!!! Want a slap? Wanna get sent back to your school days??/ Eh??? I'll just get a new one.....Oh but I'm broke!! And my folks don't financially support me when it comes to Art. Well, I'm 16 so I guess I have to look for....*sigh* a job.

Matt: Less closeups....Got it. Of course I LOVE BC (which reminds me that I need to get the last 4 volumes). I must admit, the presentation on both those manga is incredible. I love it!!!! Well, BC is newer so that's probably the reason why it was easier to follow.

I got you on that Bleach tip. I don't want a chapter ending up as scribbles an SFX.

And no, it wasn't a rant.

Next update? Sure, why not?

I kinda.....Dunno.
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An old pic of Analise with Death Note ending 1 (Alumina by Nightmare) scattered around it. I'm not telling you why she's wearing that...Because I forgot. XD It's not part of TWLOO, don't worry.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/229/f/a/Analise__2009_by_Renzokuken121.jpg

HE'S NOT FEMALE!!!
His appearance grabs a lot of attention, though. It's just how he was born.
Kain from Vanguard: TWLOO/ Rose of Rebirth.
So, I finally got a look for him, lol

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The very first pictures of Armour guy and Serena (she hasn't shown up yet) from TWLOO.
I will show you the more developed ones at a later date.

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Al-Ren (you'll love him when you see his full name) and Sierra. Early designs......
Crap....
Al-Ren has an eerie resemblance to Shiki.....OTL
I didn't even mean to D:

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He doesn't wear that for long. ^

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Renzokuken121 has 2,540 pageviews total and their 120 deviations were viewed 2,030 times. Renzokuken121 watches 611 people, while 66 people watch Renzokuken121.

Overall, their deviations received 284 comments and were added to deviants' favourites 123 times, while Renzokuken121 commented 950 times, making about 3.46 comments per day since Renzokuken121 joined DA. This means that Renzokuken121 gave 33 comments for every 10 that Renzokuken121 received.

Their deviation with the most comments is Rage. Power. Corruption. with 22 comments, while their most favourited one is Release the Beasts, with 10 favourites. Their most viewed deviation is Huh? with 70 views.

4 favourites were given for every 10 comments.

Every 2.2 days Renzokuken121 uploads a new deviation, and it's usually on a Monday, with 31 (26%) of their deviations.

Their busiest month was July 2010 with 35 (29%) of their deviations.

The majority of their deviations are uploaded to the cartoons gallery (113), while their favourite category was cartoons > drawings with 109 deviations.

Comments per deviation: 2.36
Favourites per deviation: 1.02
Views per deviation: 16
Comments per day: 1.03
Favourites per day: 0.44
Deviation views per day: 7.41
Pageviews per day: 9.27


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: PracticePracticePractice- (Kain pg
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 2:08 pm 
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Holy crap, that really does look like Shiki. Now just add some tao powers and a giant insect.


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: PracticePracticePractice- (Kain pg
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I like the guy with mask wrap. His hair seems a bit stiff tho.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: PracticePracticePractice- (Kain pg
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Oh my god, a job. Im almost 16, DONT GET A JOB.

Oh, and nice work. Should I post my dA details?

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: PracticePracticePractice- (Kain pg
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 1:17 pm 
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Hmm. Your clothing folds could use some work. Remember, folds aren't just lines on fabric. They also have shape and form. Try to vary the kinds of folds you draw and try to draw them in a way that's 3-dimensional.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: PracticePracticePractice- (Kain pg
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:26 pm 
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Cype: Wow, CypressDahlia, MT artist extraordinaire commenting in my thread? I'm honoured. Thanks for pointing that out. I've been getting rusty as of late. I think I'll go study up again today.

Back in '07/ '08 when I thought I was a badass.

Now I realise that I wasn't neither am I now a badass OTL.

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.......2008 was a good year. I see now that I haven't improved all that much. OTL
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Sora from my series Venus' Cry that I first thought of in 2009 which is when I drew this.

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Ironically, this is a cat girl called Cat.

Drawn in 2009

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....Not much to say really.

I was just digging through my 2007/2008 draw and found this.

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2008/ 2009

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WIP
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Now my most recent work.
Finished result Rosa side:

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I'm so retarded OTL

Finished result Kain side:
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So there you have it, I am too strange for words......

Face rubbin' time....

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Renzokuken121 has 2,588 pageviews total and their 129 deviations were viewed 2,128 times. Renzokuken121 watches 623 people, while 66 people watch Renzokuken121.

Overall, their deviations received 291 comments and were added to deviants' favourites 125 times, while Renzokuken121 commented 967 times, making about 3.49 comments per day since Renzokuken121 joined DA. This means that Renzokuken121 gave 33 comments for every 10 that Renzokuken121 received.

Their deviation with the most comments is Rage. Power. Corruption. with 22 comments, while their most favourited one is Release the Beasts, with 10 favourites. Their most viewed deviation is Huh? with 70 views.

4 favourites were given for every 10 comments.

Every 2.1 days Renzokuken121 uploads a new deviation, and it's usually on a Monday, with 31 (24%) of their deviations.

Their busiest month was July 2010 with 35 (27%) of their deviations.

The majority of their deviations are uploaded to the cartoons gallery (121), while their favourite category was cartoons > drawings with 117 deviations.

Comments per deviation: 2.25
Favourites per deviation: 0.96
Views per deviation: 16
Comments per day: 1.05
Favourites per day: 0.45
Deviation views per day: 7.68
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Erm.....That's it, I think.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:55 pm 
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Your old stuff is actually pretty good. From then till now, you've maintained a style and improved the heck out of it.

By the way, do Rosa and Kain actually have those face tattoo/marking-ish things? Or is that like a variation on an "overdrive mode?" Or maybe just random.


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 5:07 am 
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Your old stuff is actually pretty good. From then till now, you've maintained a style and improved the heck out of it.

By the way, do Rosa and Kain actually have those face tattoo/marking-ish things? Or is that like a variation on an "overdrive mode?" Or maybe just random.


Thanks, man.

For Kain....That's undecided. As for Rosa.......er....Yes. But I doubt you won't know why yet.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 5:22 am 
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I think the last pic needs more to it. The foliage/flowers need more bulk i think. I feel that the flowers should be more imposing on the faces/heads so that the necks and hair sort of fade into or dissapear behind the leaves or flowers. I like the composition of it all. itd be really artsy with some kind of poem or saying from both of them thrown in on the open areas of the sides *Nerdy*.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 5:30 am 
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Yes...yes...That's it.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:01 am 
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I love your sketches, especially the last two pictures.

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