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How am I doing?
Really good. 20%  20%  [ 7 ]
Good. 51%  51%  [ 18 ]
OK. 20%  20%  [ 7 ]
Bad. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Awful...Give up. NOW! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Don't make me voice my opinion....(It's BS) 9%  9%  [ 3 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:59 am 
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lol. Ego time. You already know my opinion on this stuff. Keep up the good work man.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I'm doin' badly...OTL (pg 16)
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:39 am 
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You've gotten a lot better man.

*This:*
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Yeah, Tearju and a random waistband sketch.
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I think you have a really good eye for detail, and that last lion pic really proved the point that you have the patience to pace yourself and follow through things. One suggestion I'd have is that I think your drawings would benefit a lot if you made all your marks a lot more confident - long, smooth, accurate curves that capture the idea of the picture in a sketchy style. You know, relaxing your arm and applying more of your elbow and wrist. Using shorter marks on top of each other to build structure is also a valid style I've seen many professional artists use, but I get the feeling that it shouldn't be the only trick up your sleeve. Great improvement overall though.

I think you're doing really well, which is why I became so enthusiastic in commenting on your work. Hope it was worth something at the very least. xD


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:19 pm 
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Wow, I didn't know you were in college. Time sure goes by fast o.o
The shading is pretty good with that guy with the gun(max or someone from deathnote?)
I wish I could actually give a real critique here XD

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
PostPosted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 8:10 pm 
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All those eyes man, damn. Its a very rewarding quality to have multiple styles :D Awesome job!

Im waiting on your gift until Cype finishes the last part of his concept art tutorial, which covers background speed painting/environment colors (which I know nothing about, hence why im procrastinating on the gift)

And also, I noticed a dramatic change in line cleanliness. Another amazing thing :)


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
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That Train pic is probably my favorite from you. It just has a distinctness to it and it stands out from the rest of your art.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
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Yay, Black Cat! Well, that's probably the only fanart I'd ever do (aside from Tei).

Anyway, I wanna know something. How is it, that every time I think I'm catching up to you, you post a hugely improved update? EVERY TIME!

Excellent folds in every picture. You've even moved to a bit of still life--backgrounds--something only a few artists here actually do. Train looked awesome too. (Partial bias--he's my favorite manga hero)

One little gripe though. Your male characters--although their eyes are distinctive--all look pretty much the same. It's the hair that does it, I think. Their hairstyles (and colors) are too similar.


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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:29 pm 
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BB: Yeah, I know. Thanks again, boss.

Hamachi: Thanks a bunch, Hamachi. I hear that a lot, actually and no matter how hard I try, I can seem to do it! My confidence isn't one of my best traits but I think I'm slowly approaching the goal I set in 2009. T_T
My Lecturer in College did give us brief advice on line fluidity but we'll see if I've improved in that sense soon enough. Thanks for the advice. I'll take yours and add it to everyone's advice prior. I'll make it. Bear with me, guys....>_>

C'pn Slurp: Lol, close. I know why you think Max, though (the goggles, right? XD).
It's Train from Black Cat. Now the author, Kentaro Yabuki/ Yabuki Kentaro was mentored by Obata- Death Note's artist so it's understandable that you thought it was a DN character. Thanks dude!

BB (again):
Why ruin my fun? Really. ;A;

Rei: Thank you, Rei. I was out of practice for the face..OTL I needed a little refresher session.
I can wait. The fact that I'm getting a gift really has me all excited, lol.
Really? First Hamachi, now you; I really don't see it but. I hope it's permanent....

Celeste: Thank you!! It's my recent-most picture. Maybe I've leveled-up? XD

Matt: Lol I don't like fanart that much, either.
I wouldn't say HUGELY per se but I feel I may have leveled up (big-headed much?).
Thank you, as Cype said before, I needed to work on my folds so I went and practiced. Hopefully, I'm alright.... Bias is good; I need to feed my ego, lol.
Also, very perceptive Matt! I had hoped someone else would've noticed (or if they did, mentioned it). It's a problem that I'm having right now. I'm trying to balance out my work and my actual OCs need work. SO they are my next focus.
Thanks, man.

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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:31 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Renzo's Rebirth Art: I do Fanart now? BLASPHEMY!!! (pg 1
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