hi, this is my first drawing i am going to post here.
its not a complete original piece so i don't take the full credit for it.

my drawing:


the drawing i took as a example (i did not trace it and i have given my own touch to it):

http://www.battlefieldit.org/TechnoGuru/2007-2008/Madelyn%20Hee/anime%20pics/BLEACH__Kuchiki_Rukia_by_dejichan.jpg

hey nice work.. my main crit would be the end of the skirt should overlap the thigh. Here you make it look like thigh is disconnected to the hip.. all that requires to fix, is bring the line to the right a bit and your groovy..

thx for the crit, and yea i noticed that to but i was to lazy to fix it

here is a drawing i made completely by myself.
no revs so yes i take fully credit for it