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PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 6:20 am 
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Hello everybody I'm new(ish) (I forgot my username and password and haven't postedn over a year so I might as well be)

I just bought a new how-to-draw book, one wich speaciales on normal day-to-day poses. Please give me c & c so I can improve, thanks. :)

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I'll post I coloured version once I get round to it.

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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:00 am 
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You should warn people of cigarettes.


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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:16 am 
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I smoke cigarettes >.>

But hey.. the only REAL thing that throws it off is her jaw line.
Also, are you drawing directly from the book or making your own poses and designs?

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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:42 pm 
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@ Sottaceti: Okay will do in future.

@ Egoslip: Books poses, mostly. My desighns, (how to draw books don't really contain pics of school girl's smoking):- thus I altered the pose a bit.

And mayby I'm blind but what's wrong with her jaw line?


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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:51 pm 
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It just looks like her head was pasted on there man.. I personally don't think the jaw should connect to the below the ear from that angle.. and I believe the neck is supposed to align with the bottom of the ear at the edge of the jaw.. in realistic porportions.

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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:53 pm 
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ok I am blind, I see your point.


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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
PostPosted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 12:56 pm 
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lol you're not blind.. you just don't know anybetter :P

There's a lot you learn from drawing realism that manga books can't teach you...

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 Post subject: Re: Peteman
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Manga instruction books have a much lower quality standard than realism ones. I'd suggest trying to use those and later translate them into a manga style. That being said, I really like the legs and feet, but I think you should work on folds. C:


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