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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Spider-man fanart! C&C pl
PostPosted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 12:54 pm 
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Thanks for all the comments, guys. C:
Hopefully this drawing of my new OC is good with the arms :0 Sorry for the sketchyness..I did it with a pen OTL
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Purple animal brigade has been completed xD I drew those animals for my friends.
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. New OC work
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I have not been dead. Its just im really lazy when it comes to me updating this blasted thing. But I do it for the Crits and comments :O SO. CONTINUING--- I have been working on developing a style, and trying to get used to the block figure method.

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This, is my boob practice. I know that the boob far far far to the right (our right) sucks. And I know where it should be, im just too Lazy to redline it.
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Fox thing. >__> I didnt use a figure, I just kinda drew it. So. Uh.
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Collab with Rei 8D I did the guy on the left, and he did the one on the right. C:
Im trying to develop a face style so. yeah. I like the nose/mouth on this one ^^^
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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I like that you're not afraid to do fullbodies. Well, yeah, you're at the level where it'd be strange if you WERE, but still--nice.

I don't think it's the shape of that far right boob that's making it look bad so much as the positioning. Try putting them a little closer together--of course, considering the bra/clothing. But on that particular one, closer together would be better. On the middle woman, her toes are pointed in, and her legs are spread. That is painful on the ankles. I got this same crit awhile back, so it should be accurate. Bend the knees in if the toes are gonna be pointed in. Put the thighs together and spread the shins out. It's a common pose, especially in the moe genre, so you should be able to find references around the web. And finally, the woman on the far right. Actually, my crit depends on one thing: is that little oval-ish almond thing her bellybutton? If so, raise it up. That's where pubic hair goes. Now that I think of it, you have that on all of them. It goes a little below the thinnest part of the waist.

Whew. I shoulda spaced that out a little more.

Wait, I can't come here and not give a little praise. The fox thing! I'm horrible at animals, so I kinda wouldn't know if it's good or bad, but it looks good to me, and I like it. Good job.


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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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:0 -takes notes- k

Thanks for the crit on the legs/bellybutton positioning man C:

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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I really like your male characters, but the females seem kind of masculine. Try making the females slimmer, more rounded and curvy. Also the silly goose seem just slightly too far down on the body.

Before you take my advice, can someone else tell me if i am right? Cuz I'm not an expert on anatomy and I don't want Joosh to get the wrong idea.

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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Rei; Hey man, he said it was a true story.
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Ozza; Yeah. They do need to be thinner and curvier. I just sux at the wimmen anatomy. Im gonna practice wimmen more now.

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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Anatomy Level up? I dunno.
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Collab with Wolf, I did the guys on the left. He tried drawing in "My style" But I dont think I have one thats solid just yet

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Anatomy level up?
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u just keep getting worse with time jk. I love how well you're doing. Continue getting better. >:C OR ELSE.

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Collab with Sutari
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ozzaharwood wrote:
I really like your male characters, but the females seem kind of masculine. Try making the females slimmer, more rounded and curvy. Also the silly goose seem just slightly too far down on the body.

Before you take my advice, can someone else tell me if i am right? Cuz I'm not an expert on anatomy and I don't want Joosh to get the wrong idea.


The silly goose aren't too low, I don't think. The shoulders might be a bit too sloped, though. Strange. Realistic anatomy clearly shows women with shoulders far more sloped than males', but in anime, girls have the slimmest, straightest shoulders of any cartoon style. Hm . . . I can't help you on that one. Someone who knows professional anatomy should probably tell you for sure. Rei?


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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Anatomy level up?
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They are too far down. His women are overelongated and far too meaty. Very manly.


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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Some moar Stoof and Fanar
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Some moar stoof
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Woah what the silly goose, man?
You've seriously improved a buttload since the last time I remember seeing your art. Keep up the good work, dude.


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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD .:UPDATE:. Some moar stoof
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I'm liking all of these...looks like someone also has a Pikmin addiction loool, ya you've gotten a lot better lately.

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