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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: SKin coloring Practice+Ninja poses
PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:43 pm 
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I already have done a redline for you, so you know what I told you to fix on the ninja ones. Also, beast coloring man. I wanna see more shading though!

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: SKin coloring Practice+Ninja poses
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:21 pm 
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Seefy; a lot of people seem to not see my thread, no one posts! D: BUT THANKYOUILOVEYOU your thread is more awesome, foo'. And I just repeatedly drew men in different poses and studied anatomy to get good lol.
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Boobs, plus a male anatomy pose.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:11 pm 
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I don't get alot of posts in my thread either :/

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Boobs, plus a male anatomy pose.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:13 pm 
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Damn, I wish I could get on GB. I WISH IT WOULD QUIT KILLING FIREFOX.

But that aside, the anatomy on the previous page was such a jump ahead compared to your usual work that I wondered if it was even you who did it at first! Those are the best bodies I've ever seen you draw :)

But for the boob picture on this page, her eyes are way too close together. And unless she's wearing a corset or something, her torso shouldn't bend in that far up. Try to even out the midsection a little (if that makes sense OTL )


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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Boobs, plus a male anatomy pose.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:32 pm 
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Holy fuck these are damn good.

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Boobs, plus a male anatomy pose.
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The girl's hand looks a little small, and like Sutari said, eyes look a little close.

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Boobs, plus a male anatomy pose.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 10:58 pm 
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WOAH, COMMENTS!

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Rei; Omg then use google chrome, it works for that. WOULDYOURATHERTRADEYOURFRIENDSFORCONVENIENCE?
jkjk And okay, do you want me to fix them or just know what I did wrong, lol. AND YES the eyes are too close together D: Also, I guess I did have an anatomy leap. thanks man. ^_^ I consider you one of my artistic heroes and this crit means a lot somehow LOL

FabiaFidus; Lol, thanks man. :)

arashi; Yeah the hand is too small. In fact, if I were too make it bigger I think the whole arm would have to change. BUT THANKS FOR THE COMMENT BRO ;D
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Little King and Arm studies
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 11:28 pm 
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Hmm.. on the arm studies, you're missing some key musculature, added some that aren't supposed to be there, and got some other parts spot on. Did you use a reference?

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Little King and Arm studies
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Yeah, ego. But I failed at copying it. LOL

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Little King and Arm studies
PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 11:36 pm 
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hmm.. try to think of the arm as a multitude of shapes put together, instead of just one whole arm.. think of how those shapes fold around and under each other... i'll show you what I mean in GB if you want.

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Little King and Arm studies
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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Green Guy colored.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:31 pm 
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Oooh I really like green :D so I think the top of the heads too big or maybe its the shape I dunno

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Green Guy colored.
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I intended that to be his hair actually. :S

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Green Guy colored.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:22 pm 
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Joosh wrote:
I intended that to be his hair actually. :S

I know that but In my opinion it looks oddly shaped. Is that the stlye of his hair?

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 Post subject: Re: Joshua's ART THREAD: Green Guy colored.
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Lol, I actually like his head. And the pose is pretty awesome.


As for the arms, I'd also like to point out that you defined every muscle with a line, which makes it look really sinewy and fake (like a greasy, over-defined bodybuilder). I'd suggest using more subtle shading instead of lines to define a majority of those muscles groups instead. Unless, of course, you're looking for that over-defined Capcom-ish look.

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