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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:54 pm 
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HolyFuggnuggets wrote:
Wait, I remember this style. It's very good. Very very good.

Did you use to have another username? Mr...Something. I don't quite remember...

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
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Reminds me of Muzi stuff lol. Really good.

Yeah is like a better Mizu XD

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 8:46 am 
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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 1:52 am 
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Were you referring to the thick lines? Sketch lines I use SAI marker tool hence they appear light. Lineart, I use the pen tool with a size of 1/4th the marker size I used...here in 5px. I use blackest black...probably the lines are too thin that they look grey.

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Thanks master. It's nice that you remembered the name of a commoner >.>

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With all due respect, Mizukiyanagi and myself are in different planes of the art world
It is completely wrong to compare our works because our paths do not intersect

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-the details killed me
-In the end, I decided to go full body
-tweaked for the loli factor 8D though she isn't completely loli because I used 7 heads scale
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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 1:54 am 
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Ahhh, I love the way you draw feet--

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 3:41 am 
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nice and clean ;) I like your style

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 7:42 am 
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That's a nice compliment since I'm getting demotivated by feet because they're too hard to draw...like hands
I need to practice them

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Getting myself killed by detail obsession seems worth it
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-by the way, I don't think this is classifiable as material for 18+
-and I didn't think of anatomy and proportion
-just plain bored and the need to draw frilly objects
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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:11 am 
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Welcome back. Nice frills.

Her left shoulder is creepin me out though.

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
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Hello thar almighty god,
You didn't like the puffed sleeves? o_0
or I probably messed it up by putting armpit folds xP
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I knew I should've turned into a puffed frilled sleeve...>.>


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:43 am 
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Nice and as cypress said, the left shoulder is rather creepy DX

Colour those pictures! NOW! XD

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:51 am 
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Are you guys trying to tell me that I should remove the puffed sleeve because I suck at trying to do that and so as to leave her shoulders bare for everyone to see and increase the fanservice factor by nth value because not only does it present the foot fetish and the panty shot, it would also have the glory of the armpit fetish o_0

lol xD


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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:55 am 
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No, its the anatomy on the left shoulder taht is off. and it looks rather creepy

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
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I red lined it myself lol
-I don't get what's wrong >.>
-The pluffed sleeve is wrong? I have no idea how it behaves at such a bend though
-I proposed another sleeve position in blue
-In red is the anatomy lines
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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 11:40 am 
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It's as the others said, the first thing that came in my eyes were her shoulder.

But dude... even so, your art is awesome !

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 Post subject: Re: The Obituary
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I didn't realize it was a puffy sleeve. My bad. It's just that the right shoulder looks bare yet the left one doesn't (and, assuming it was bare, I was like "OMG"). But yeah. I'd go with what you have in the update. The blue line. It makes it more clear that she's wearing puffy sleeves. Also, some nice stretching on the sleeve would probably hit the point home a lot better. Aside from that, her shins are different lengths when put into "perspective sense". Though her right shin is pointing more directly at the viewer, it is still longer than the left. The left should appear longer due to the less direct perspective.

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