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Look through my works. How am I improving?
Perfect! I can't possibly say anything more then that. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Impressive. Your works are awsome! Please post more. 6%  6%  [ 1 ]
Decent. i see some flaws. But you are quite Good! 81%  81%  [ 13 ]
Bad. But keep going ;) 13%  13%  [ 2 ]
Worse.. But you seem to be able to improve. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Quit allready...you are hopeless! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 11:10 am 
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Niceeeee. Keep working on your poroportions though. One thing I see wrong is that the girls right leg knee is farther down then her left.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 11:56 am 
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oh yeh. thanks.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 8:26 am 
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fold. emotion. drama. and male-anatomy tests.

i decided to begin with the male characters now.
its not finished i know.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sun May 02, 2010 9:46 am 
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Not bad! legs should be bigger becasue his weight is on them. The clothes should be more "relaxed" and not so.... stiff or mechanical. His ear is missing as well DX

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 08, 2010 6:22 pm 
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Allright then, im back.

So i worked abit on this one as an "overall" practice. folds. sync with characters. emotion. hands. feet.

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Still working hard on proportions.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Mon May 10, 2010 12:49 pm 
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Oi guys! im back again! i was unable to use the internet for a while!. but that sure didnt keep me away from practice.
Here goes. Lineart. and profile practice.

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I recommand you to go to my deviantart to watch it with better quality on the link below. (for details)

http://animeculture.deviantart.com/art/ ... -163598978


hmm maybe the feet are too close?

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Tue May 11, 2010 4:04 pm 
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Outlined and colourd.

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http://animeculture.deviantart.com/art/ ... -163726738

for the higher resolution one. (for the details)


P.S i wanna thank all who posted on this thread. All those advices were great!

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Wed May 12, 2010 8:02 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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I really like the girl, clean lines and a good choice of colour. (I think pink/purple and yellow is a great combo)

I think her left knee sticks out a little too far, and the angles on the top of her sock seem a little funky. Overall it's a nice piece, well done.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Sat May 15, 2010 7:14 am 
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yeah the knee.
im not gonna change it, but i will prevent it in the future :)

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Wed May 19, 2010 4:05 pm 
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Progression work:
part 2.

title: Sunset

I have changed alot, lines, better shading.

Made in sai paint.
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Im still working on the hands. but i keep em as this till its finished.

This is a drawing i work on over time, and keep posting when i progress untill its finished.

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Part 2:

Added:

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
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She looks half black and half white...You didnt do the shading right. GRADUALLY blend those colors, or it doesnt look right. Like light darker..dark. I can see you did that. It might be the case that the white color is too light. Darken it.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art
PostPosted: Mon May 24, 2010 5:36 am 
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but if i blend it, how can i "show" the shape of the nose and chin? im just curious if it would look right that it just goes gradually from light to dark over the nose.

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Hmm well, if you imagine the face, the nose would be an object obstructing passage of light across it completely so thus it leaves a dark shadow on the other side of the face while its outline has a high contrast light because it is hit by the light source. The forehead and the chin are areas that are not obstructing the passage of your light source so thus your light will behave like a gradient (gradually moves from light to dark). The cheeks are semi obstructive so they leave shadows near the crevices that compose the snout/rostrum region, unless your style follows a very simplistic one, you'll have to take note of that as well...

Basically, the face has 6 centers of light obstucting areas you need to keep in mind: the forehead, left and right cheek, the nose, the lips and the chin
The two eyelids can also be included if the person is purely of the east asian type because their eyelids are thicker and more prominent thus obstructing light instead of letting it pass, if not then the eyes serve more as sinks or areas of shadow


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