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Look through my works. How am I improving?
Perfect! I can't possibly say anything more then that. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Impressive. Your works are awsome! Please post more. 6%  6%  [ 1 ]
Decent. i see some flaws. But you are quite Good! 81%  81%  [ 13 ]
Bad. But keep going ;) 13%  13%  [ 2 ]
Worse.. But you seem to be able to improve. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Quit allready...you are hopeless! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
PostPosted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 6:04 pm 
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I'm working on some traditional nature background.

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I started the lining. this picture will take hours.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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I hate doing lineart. Nice and smooth, though!!

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
PostPosted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:15 pm 
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i've been working on this all day acturally.

Still not done. going to bed.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
PostPosted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:15 am 
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The composition is brilliant. Have you been reading Cyp's Concept Art tutorials?

The horizon line corresponding to the girl's eyes is right, but the background between the main tree and the mountains seems off according to perspective. I don't know why--I'm really, really bad at that stuff.

The trees beside the house look amazing, might I add. Which tools are you using?


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
PostPosted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:23 pm 
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Hmm.. much better this time around, though I think the littlel dirt path, somehow causes the whole scene to look a bit more flat than it should. The way it recedes towards the horizon line is a little.. off.. maybe some atmospheric perspective could help a bit. Either way, i really like that tree @.@

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
PostPosted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 3:36 pm 
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@all:
Besides to the loli girl i made a while back, this is my first attempt on a brushed sai background ever.
Im happy that you like it.

Matt: To be honest, i'm not really familiar with any toturials, so im not sure what totural you talk about, sorry :( all my experience on paintings goes faar back to my prefschool art class >.< . For the whole nature sheme i only used 2 tools: 1. the marker to dump down some colours. and 2. A brush with spread&noise activated.

For the house. i acturally linarted and just colourd it as i usually do. but then changed opacity on the lines to 50%
same goes for the girl.

Egoslip: Yeah, i know the river, the bridge and the dirt path is way off perspective. I simply dump colours first, and then play with the brush afterwards. im still in practice with it.


oh btw. i did this in paint tool sai..

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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Allright, i wanted to try some strong shading.

Unfinished. going to bed.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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The idea behind the picture and what you are trying to capture here is astounding. However, her head is much too large.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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MAN YOU GOT GOOD.
THAT LINEART IS THE CHIZ. I 'specially like the nose. the line there, and the shading reminds me of Shounen Jump and stuff. It would be an amazing picture if you just fixed up the head size :0 Try the cropping tool, and transform. That could work. Idk.


BUT I LOVE THE LAST ONE. ITS AMAZING. GAAAH. YOUR COLORING. I WUNTS IT.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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Thanks for cnc.

man. i've been practicing so much on hands lately... but i forgot i had troubble with heads :p

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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*Stares*

Sir, you've inspired me to try out drawing backgrounds.

Which tool are you using on the skin? Looks like either pen or marker, but I'm not sure. That aside, you've got some great lineart. What's your line smoothing set at?


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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It's the marker tool :3 but i used pencil at the hair.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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I'm really loving the color. I can't wait to see this when it's finished. @_@

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] CG paint tool sai style
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All painted in paint tool sai. I changed the head abit ;D
This picture took most of my time today ...
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The background and, strangely enough, the tongue (o_O) turned out really nice.

Advice on clouds: clouds aren't mostly one solid color. Use patches of dark and light tones overlapping each other. I see you have a cloud brush and that's just fine but your clouds look rather "solid". They need more of a fluffy appeal. Also, at no point should a cloud be as bright as the moon. =P

The other thing is that the shading on the clothes looks a little muddy. I see you're going for a realistic wrinkled look but you need areas of sharp contrast to give it form.

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