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Look through my works. How am I improving?
Perfect! I can't possibly say anything more then that. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Impressive. Your works are awsome! Please post more. 6%  6%  [ 1 ]
Decent. i see some flaws. But you are quite Good! 81%  81%  [ 13 ]
Bad. But keep going ;) 13%  13%  [ 2 ]
Worse.. But you seem to be able to improve. 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Quit allready...you are hopeless! 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:58 pm 
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The perspective is great!
lovin' the shadows.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
PostPosted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 4:07 pm 
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Tried another pose + other style and colourd.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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what.. in.. the.. world.. is she holding? Dirty things come to mind.. i like her hair :)

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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Haven't introduced my self yet on the welcome wagon, but I will soon. From what I've seen you'r work is nice :). But this picture It seems... her leg seems to be broken, or the boots are too big for your feet/legs lol. But Overall it's a nice picture and what a odd weapon ;D


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:43 am 
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I feel abit embarressed right now. seems i totally forgot to paint the weapon ...

It's acturally her gun btw.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:16 am 
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I have posted the same image before, but I changed the haircolour darker and tried to correct the far behind legg slightly. Didn't seem to work :p

Anyways, I wanted to gt better at using the brush and watercolour tool in Paint tool sai.
After i dumped some base colours to the castle wall and added a background i made a few perspectivation lines and added a few detail lines.

I tried to work with some highlighting on the cloths from the powerfull light comming from her gun.

Her current motion: She is jumping down from a platform, i am drawing it later.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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Looks like something out of a side-scroller game, the way you have it planned out.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 8:22 am 
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I thought exactly the same thing.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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Hands too small.
Head slightly too big.

monsterful fanart.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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fabiafidus wrote:
Hands too small.
Head slightly too big.

That. Good job catching it.

Also, I think you should define the left breast a little more (her right)--just the side and/or bottom, though. Right now it looks almost like it's missing.

*My 50th "breast" critique. Yay.*

Again, I like the style.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 8:51 am 
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Just a cute pic I made when I was bored.

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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:D

I like it. Can't see anything majorly wrong right away, so I'll just leave it at that.


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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Comic, Black rock shooter drawing
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I think it was because everything was abit stylized. but please dont be afraid to crit the style even :D

In loli mood again:

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I was also messing with perspectives:

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Lolies!
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Hey there, groovy perspective practice on the last one, though remember, a part of perspective is also scaling, the girl looks a bit out of scale in comparison to the building, with her placement and size, the building kind of looses it's grandness.. awesome designs as well!

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 Post subject: Re: Fabiafidus' Art [poll] Lolies!
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Thanks for the feedback on perspective! :D


Now. i spend ALOT of time on this one. i corrected alot, and basicly i was so determined to make it look somewhat perfect.

I made this entirely through paint tool sai.

Its basicly a Lineart and Recolourd picture of the girl i made.

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