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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Request something if you wish.
PostPosted: Sun May 30, 2010 1:25 pm 
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There you go Clock, hope you like it.

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Two slots still open guys, go ahead and ask something.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Request something if you wish.
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super smooth lineart. I want to see some colouring from yooou

I request a guy with a lot a bunch of tribial markings on his face thats hunting. go!

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Request something if you wish.
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I request, an Alucard! http://media.comicvine.com/uploads/3/39 ... _super.png

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Request something if you wish.
PostPosted: Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:39 am 
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Okay guys, I´ll shall start on your request soon, I just had to get this out of the way.

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It´s a fanart of Fran from FFXII, a freind requested it. I´ve done this in a hurry so please C&C.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests closed and Fran fanart.
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An Alucard for Lucifer.
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Hope you like it man. C&C guys.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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Man I feel so ignored :(

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Comment if you like...

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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Thanks for Alucard man, now he looks like a real menacing spirit. Just one thing about his doggie arm, why does it seem like it has 3 teeth that go in another direction from the rest? :P

As for guitar girl, nice but I think her arms are a bit thin and you didn't finish the other hand D:

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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Yeah you´re right I forgot the other hand OTL.

And about the teeth that go up I got the impression I saw some like that in the ref pic.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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About the latest one...

Lets see... Well, the arms seem too skinny, the perspective for the guitar seems off I think and is a tad too big, IMO.

The lines are a bit shaggy in a few parts, but overall the detail you do is pretty funky looking.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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First of all thanks for the crits. It feels good to know that atleast someone still cares enough to criticize my artwork.

And about the guitar, yes you are totally right I messed up at the porportion. Expecially the fretboard. And also the lines are a little messy this time, I need to clean them up.

About the arms and the size of the guitar they are intentional since I was going for a Noodle fanart ( looks like I failed because no one recognized her -.- ) and she´s quite small and skinny.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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People probably said this already, but you have some proportions to work on. Preferable the size of the torso. Well not really the size, as much as the shape. Augh, I'm terrible at this. And I did recognize Noodle! But you already noticed your problems, so all thats left is to fix them right? ;D

Also, your lineart has gotten AMAZING. Just keep in mind that line weight should be added at "choke points" primarily in folds. Like, at the spots when they are bunched together, and stuff. I'm probably not saying this correctly =_= I apologize. But please keep up the good work!


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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
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For the ninja girl
-the neck seems to be dislocated this is because the face is too much to her left when she is already looking towards her right...try this, tilt your head to the right, you'll see that you chin touches your shoulder. Basically, the path of the head rotates 180degree from shoulder to shoulder.
-Also if you care for skinfolds, the arm resting on the floor should have the skin or atleast the "flab" of the arm spreading on the surface, that's a bit advanced but it's fun to do those types of details xD

For the Fran fanart, since you did it in a hurry, I'm assuming that what I'll see here are areas that you do more like a trend so this may be areas that you have to focus on to resolve the trend. Going from top to bottom
-The facial structure seems to lack foreshortening on the waning side if you know what I mean. That is, her left eye needs a little bit more foreshortening to look correct. his also occurs on the ninja girl above but it's more evident here.
-The jaw as well does not connect up to the ears even though it's a given that Fran is old enough. As a note, only kids and fat/chubby people don't have prominent defined jaws
-The neck muscles surrounding the throat needs a fix. A good rule to follow is that the line marking the throat begins at the corners of the jaws and sink down to unite with the collar bones near the central axis of the body (also the sternum, this is because the neck muscle originates from the anteriormost end of the sternum and inserts on to the jaw) TMI xD sorry, occupational hazard
-the shoulders do need to be a bit more stable in a sense that they are sharper to the ends. Note also that the colar bone ends nead the edge of the shoulder, try feeling you shoulders and you'll notice a lump there that you can trace to the collarbone
-the armpits because they are important for me xD, try drawing in the pectoral muscles, deltoids and biceps to figure out how to draw the armpits and the skin fold there.
-The chest lacks 3dimensionality, if you are aware of the 45 degree rule from the collar bone to locate the nipples, that is helpful to locating the location of the silly goose in general
-The arms look a bit flimsy, also the upper arm is a bit too long , it should end right under the breast or right beside the last rib. (I do not know if Fran's race follows a different proportions though, I'm viewing it from a human basis)
-The hands are too complicated to teach. What I can say is that you should try generalizing the hand as a paddle then try to place in the fingers.
-The lower end of the but shouldn't curve that deep into the thigh, it should just touch then follow the thigh unless of course, the thigh has high fat density
-The front side of the thigh has a weird sink in it, it should just curve straight down because at that angle, only the quardiceps would be visible on the front side.

If something is unclear, just say it and I'll try to redline it.


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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Requests: One done, one to go.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:15 pm 
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@Sutari and Obitual Crow, thanks you very much for the crits guys. I think I´ve fixed most of the things you pointed out.

Okay, some crappy new sketches. Nothing serious.

http://i863.photobucket.com/albums/ab19 ... 001-15.jpg

http://i863.photobucket.com/albums/ab19 ... 001-16.jpg

http://i863.photobucket.com/albums/ab19 ... /002-7.jpg

C&C if you wish.

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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Crappy sketches (Nude stuff)
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 Post subject: Re: HtE´s suff. Crappy sketches (Nude stuff)
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really interesting stuff O:

the last one is awesome

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