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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 1:15 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 1:14 pm 
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Sorry if it takes me too long to post since I'm really slow at drawing... ><

I call the little floating cute cats "Nyani".
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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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Your composition is really weak in both pictures.

First one
Why is the character at the center of the page? Is there any significant purpose for her being placed there? What are you using to balance the composition?

The second
It has more balance with the cat in there. Your shading is all the same value.

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Again why is the character the center of the page and you should try avoiding chopping off her legs like you are currently doing.

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:18 pm 
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You are better than you give yourself credit for! And don't worry, I'm slow at drawing too. I prefer quality over quantity anyways.

I'll redline the last one in a little bit, though there aren't that many flaws. (And I think your "de"s are missing diacritics. Also, the ma in dorama should be katakana.)


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:12 pm 
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@Blackmage: You might be right... I never did consider those aspects before since I only draw by feeling T.T

@Sutari: Thanks, I really appreciate it. My grammar in Japanese isn't that good so it's okay if you correct me. I learn from mistakes... ^^'


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:31 pm 
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Her left arms seems a bit small to me. Liked your idea of the floating cats :)


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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you're getting better.... still, work on the details on the dress... and also the shading..and the left arm is a bit smaller than the other..

it would be better if you included her feet.. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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I am very sorry this took so long ... been busy
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(her head was just fine before I redrew it so badly xD, please dont take it seriously. Its just that her arms needed to be in proportion with her body in terms of length. Also, the perspective you had her in was just fine as well, I ended up unintentionally changing it. gah, I need to get better at that.)


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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Thanks for the Red LInes Sutari!!

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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Wow, I don't know why but your art style (to me, at least) is awesome. I say the only thing it needs to improve for now is to make drawings more detailed, with BG's and such.

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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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Thank you so much Sutari! ^^


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine (Body Practice)
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:29 am 
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Hi guys, here are my new sketches. (took me 10 hours each to make since I'm really slow when drawing ><). Please give some opinion to the drawings and support why. I need it so I can improve more. I tried drawing them using Photoshop but I keep on getting really really bad drawings. ><

A prince that became a prisoner
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Fashion model pose
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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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I like the effect of the model's hair and eyes. You should try coloring your stuff in. I think the prince would look especially cool.


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 Post subject: Re: Art of mine
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You're getting better!!! Keep it up!!

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