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 Post subject: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:39 pm 
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I draw all sorts of things, and I also enjoy fanart. The images are small for convenience, but they can all be found at my DA gallery. I work primarily with markers.

I've been really working on trying to get my faces to look decent. In actuality, I've been trying to break away from the anime style into something more realistic.

~Kuroshitsuji~

"That Butler so Elegant" Jan 2009
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~Hellsing~

"The Evening Visitor" Jan 2010
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"Young Arthur Hellsing" March 2009
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"Pip Portrait" Feb 2009
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~Princess Tutu~

"Swan Dive" April 2009
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"A P A R T" Nov 2009
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~Various~

"Metropolitan Duke" Sept 2009
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"Petite Plie Lolita" Jan 2010
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~Non Anime~

"Baroque Beauty" April 2010
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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:28 pm 
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I really like your style a lot! You have a variety of creative poses and such. The one thing I would suggest working on is to work on the proportion of your faces. Take the time to measure out where the eyes, nose, mouth, etc, should be. It might help. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:30 pm 
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awesome work but i can see u need to work on hands a lil more


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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:02 am 
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Sunny - Thank you! I've always had trouble with faces. These older works don't show it yet, but my more recent studies and sketches have much better facial proportions. I'm excited about the progress I have made recently. :)

InsaneArt - Okay. Why? What do you see that needs work? Your comment is useless unless you explain what looks wrong.

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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 1:11 am 
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Good! Also, a suggestion....Let lights and darks show where the dark lines should go. These will add more depth to your pictures as well. The power of suggestion is win!

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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:37 am 
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o-o. What. an. amazing. style. man.

I was all "oooo, ahhhhh" then my eyes feasted on the Princess Tutu fanart and, LordM, you've got erikamae as a fan.

Loveit.

oh. Nice Horse (=

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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:24 pm 
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I just want to let you know that

a) you are righteous
b) me, Umber, and erika just had a Skype convo about how awesome you are.


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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 9:32 am 
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Epic works man.

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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 11:38 am 
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Whoa, the first one is of Kuroshitsuji. I just realized that! You're awesome. I also love Princess Tutu. It needs more fans.


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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:05 pm 
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You have a great style going here. I really like the line art on the "Metropolitan Duke" in particular.

Only 2 things pop out on me as things you might want to work on. the hands in teh first picture look a little too long over all, I think the individual bones on the fingers are just a tad too long each. Generally the length hand is about the vertical length of the face or very slightly shorter. I think you've mostly corrected that the Duke picture his visable hand looks well porportiopned and natually relaxed. The second thing is that the necks all seem longer than natual. This worked very well with the first picture it gave it a very graceful flow. And the high collars on some of the pictures balances it out there very nicely as well. It really shows on the Princess Tutu images though. It may be how thick the necks are as well though. I would try watching how thick you draw the necks with out collars and that might help the balance there.

Over all though it is beautiful style very graceful.

Oh yeah and I have a house hold of Tutu lovers over here. I turned my girlfriend and roommate on to it a few years ago. ^_^


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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:49 pm 
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Wow, thank you everyone! I'm glad you like my stuff. I'll be sure to update this thread when I post new art. I tend to be so busy with school, however, that it takes me a long time to finish anything. I love you all for your lovely comments, though! *happy dance*

----> I think it's funny that the word filter on this forum is blocking out the Japanese title of the series "Black Butler". Teehee.

Prophet - Thank you for the crit! Yes, I am aware that I make the necks too long, and I think that stems from the fact that most of my characters in the past wore collars, and I just got into that habit. I really enjoy necks, so I guess I make them too long in order to fit in more detail...It's something that I've been trying to watch.

I'm still learning about hands, and in my attempts to draw semi-realistic hands, I have been making them too long and to big. I'll work on that. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:00 pm 
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Wow awesome stuff... :D I see no problem with your hands, the legs/ankles seem off on the girl in the pink dress with the ballet slippers, but that's it- Petite Plie Lolita. That and I'd say she seems to have her torso at a strange angle from the lower half of her body, her top facing a little too much towards us, her legs a little too much away.


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 Post subject: Re: Lord MoufMouf's Art! Huzzah!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:07 pm 
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Well, the figure in the lolita drawing has hyper-extended knees, which is often seen in ballet dancers. ;)

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