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 Post subject: The Generals Art!!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:22 am 
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Just recently finished these pictures...the first one is just something i decided to do for Halloween...and the second one is something from my novel(visit cigaro08.deviantart.com for more information)....the second i know it is proportionality wrong, especially with the head....but yeah...

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 Post subject: Re: The Generals Art!!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:41 am 
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I can't put my hands on what the problem is in the second one. Maybe it is the perspecive, or it could be the muscle structure in the upper body, but down in the stomach area just seems off.Wait I think it just may be shading, from what I can tell the light source is infront of him, but if he is leaning forward a bit there should be more shadow down there.

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 Post subject: Re: The Generals Art!!
PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 5:55 pm 
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I can't put my hands on what the problem is in the second one. Maybe it is the perspecive, or it could be the muscle structure in the upper body, but down in the stomach area just seems off.Wait I think it just may be shading, from what I can tell the light source is infront of him, but if he is leaning forward a bit there should be more shadow down there.


I think it might be the head....its a bit small lol....well thats what I think..

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 Post subject: Re: The Generals Art!!
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I thought your problem was making them too big...



also I like the guy with the "I'm not dead" sign.

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