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 Post subject: ike1440's doodles and sketches
PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2010 5:56 pm 
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I've never actually completed a whole project. There are a few reasons for it (short attention span, discouragement, etc), but here are a few examples of what I can do. I've only started drawing a few months ago, so don't expect a whole lot. If these things are too big, tell me.

http://s672.photobucket.com/albums/vv86 ... ceHand.jpg

http://s672.photobucket.com/albums/vv86 ... nt=eye.jpg

http://s672.photobucket.com/albums/vv86 ... =Page3.jpg

There are a few more I'd like to show you, but I think I'll start here for now. I tried putting it on the post itself, but it kept saying "It was not possible to determine the dimensions of the image." I don't know what I'm doing wrong, so if anyone would like to help me out on that...


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 Post subject: Re: ike1440's doodles and sketches
PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2010 11:07 pm 
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Work with realism, lines and distance between draws.

The hand look bad, in the way that you did it, thinking in what made a hand, but not having a real draw of a hand to corroborate your idea (in this case, use a reference if you are practicing hand draws).

The eyes need better line work, it look very cartoonish, but without life.

The eyes and faces, some looks good and other have to much distancwe between eyes, or nose, etc. A lot fo mess.

Try to make a complet body draw so we can help you more.

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 Post subject: Re: ike1440's doodles and sketches
PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 12:16 am 
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Wow, thanks for actually taking a look at my stuff. And critiquing to boot! I didn't think anyone would bother with me.


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 Post subject: Re: ike1440's doodles and sketches
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I bother, and I would keep bothering if you improve, so keep working.

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 Post subject: Re: ike1440's doodles and sketches
PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 8:07 pm 
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Sorry for the long wait. My internet was being weird.

I drew a lot of basic full bodies. You know, without detail. I'm not very good at clothes and such yet. Each one was done in about 20 minutes, but I think this is the best one. I'll show you more after I see what you guys think.

http://s672.photobucket.com/albums/vv86 ... stScan.jpg


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