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 Post subject: Daiske's first art post
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:24 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Daiske's first art post
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:41 pm 
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V nice shoes, though, he's pretty plain. P boring pose.

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 Post subject: Re: Daiske's first art post
PostPosted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 4:56 pm 
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Yea, I had a good pose, but I messed up on the legs and had already inked it before I caught the mistake. XD


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 Post subject: Re: Daiske's first art post
PostPosted: Wed Sep 15, 2010 1:13 am 
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I like his hair color, goes well with the collar of his shirt/coat.

That said there's a few things you might want to take a look at;
He's falling over ... by which i mean his head is not centered with his feet which given the standing-with-arms-at-side pose they should be,

the zipper needs help ... can't really help you on it but the current look is more in line with heavy stitching than a zipper,

his hands are really tiny ... it's obvious you were trying to hide them with the long sleeves, but you can still see his fingers and (problematically) thumb also his fingers are really skinny too,

his legs a re a little too long ... that and the way you drew the shorts they look less like they are over-sized and more like his upper leg is really long,

finally his eyes ... is he actually looking up and to the left (seems like an odd place to arbitrarily look) if not you might want to try and figure how to give his eyes more ... for lack of a better term focus

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