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 Post subject: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:03 pm 
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Hello all of you! :oops: I Just signed and I wanted to share some of my works :)
All pencil, no digital editing. I hope it's fairly clear. :) Here I go!


http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... res/W1.jpg - Heavy armored guy. Don't you mess with him! :?

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... res/R1.jpg - Cape girl with a bow. :)

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... res/N1.jpg - well, a girl living in the forests I guess? :lol:

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... res/U1.jpg - Oh, yes I know.. the legs are toooo long. :o Gotta watch for that!

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... res/E1.jpg - Girl close-up. OK I haven't seen hair this horrible.. have you? :(

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270002.jpg - That's more acceptable for me. I like what I have done here! :D

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270008.jpg - This is not my true level :cry: Poor clothing design. I do not like this one.

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270004.jpg - Hm again horrible hair, too narrow hips, center of gravity off... :(

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270005.jpg - It's a bad guy with a gun you know! :lol: Im happy with this one.

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270009.jpg - real quick sketches, theres a water drop there also :!:

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270012.jpg - again, sketch girl. Really bad feet!

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b47 ... 270013.jpg - I know such straight-on us looks are not recommended, but anyway. :)


+16 Don't want to risk so +16 spoiler
Spoiler! :
http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b470/bmine_bucket/MyPictures/P8270016.jpg
- I could have done better... perspective is wrong... but there are some supple lines I like! :lol:

And that's about it! I am sorry for the long post. :?
What do you really think? Crits, comments, everything is welcomed! :D


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 Post subject: Re: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:04 pm 
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Wrap the links in image tags.


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 Post subject: Re: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:39 pm 
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OK.. how do I do that? You mean the [img]adress%20here[/img] ? I did this but red message appeared - Your images may only be up to 900 pixels wide.

Maybe the pictures themselves are not scaled well for preview? Also I do not have the knowledge to scale them, just not my thing... I surrender. Just delete the thread, its bad anyway. :(
I did not want to bother anyone :idea:


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 Post subject: Re: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:55 pm 
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Yeah, it means your pics are way too big. And I don't think botophucket does thumbs, that's more of an ImageShack thing. Though I could be wrong.

Nice stuff, anyway.


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 Post subject: Re: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:32 pm 
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Good work! I love the second one! :)


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 Post subject: Re: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:50 pm 
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Pic 1:
See some real armors. Also the bicep of one arm is over the chest armor (that weird).

Pic 2:
Good one, the hand need a little of works.

Pic 3:
The blended arm is longer than the other. Also the left leg is longer than the other.

Pic 4:
Again, look some real armors. Also the cross in the chest make his chest flat.

Pic 5:
Good. Nothing to say.

Pic 6:
The head is too big.

Pic 7:
Arms disproportion, the bow is in a imposible shot pose, legs disproportions, head to big. Also the pose doesn't capture the movement.

Pic 8:
Arm disproportion, the abs are very thin and the shoulders too big.

Pic 9:
The head looks appar of the body, and the clothe cut the pose of the body.

Pic 10:
Good sketches.

Pic 11:
Yeah awful feets, also the knee is looking in a weird direction (not natural).

Pic 12:
Also the hip is too thin and it look like a body builder.

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 Post subject: Re: Bminee's art - Hello everyone!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:28 am 
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Yeah you're really good and have a good understanding of dynamic poses.

But as far as crits go, Clock's on the ball.

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