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 Post subject: Seiko's Art Thread
PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:45 pm 
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I'm trying to learn how to draw so I need some crits and advice from you guys.

Here's one I did earlier:

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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
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Work on hands and feet a little - but your proportions are sadly better than mine.


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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
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What she said. I think your faces need a little more 'vibrancy'.

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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 2:55 pm 
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Peacelover wrote:
Work on hands and feet a little - but your proportions are sadly better than mine.


Ok, I'll get to work on those.

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What she said. I think your faces need a little more 'vibrancy'.


I'm not sure what you mean :/

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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 3:02 pm 
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She looks a bit male. To apply the basics of drawing females, I think maybe you might need to give her larger shines in her eyes. Or maybe 'coz I'm kinda sick, I'll type anything.


In fact, ignore everything I've just said.

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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 3:03 pm 
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Err, Ok :?

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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
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The thing that most stood out for me was her Arms/shoulders, they are way to thick for a female (unless she is a bodybuilder of course) so I would recomend thinner arms.

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 Post subject: Re: Seiko's Art Thread
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I see what you mean man, I'll keep it in mind. Thanks for the crits guys :)

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