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 Post subject: Loserfaces Art and stuff.....
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:53 pm 
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ive started to get pretty good at drawing... heres my first good sketch....
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please be easy on the comments.... :oops:

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 Post subject: Re: Loserfaces Art and stuff.....
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:57 pm 
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I think I've seen her from Chobits. You've got a bit of a handle on anatomy I see, but you need a bit of work on the face. Try drawing specific hands on certain days. Like hands on tues, feet on wends. Thats what I do :D

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 Post subject: Re: Loserfaces Art and stuff.....
PostPosted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:51 am 
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Slurpee is right about the face. Mostly from what i can tell the biggest offender of this is the eyes, nose, and "ears" are set too high ( they should be closer to the mouth) if that were fixed i imagine the rest of the face might fall into place, in particular her hair line which right now is too high. also minor note about the face, and this is assuming that you are trying to draw Chii from Chobits, the tufts of hair to the sides of her face go in front of the ears.

Beyond the face, her breast need some work, you have drawn a cleavage line (little Y shaped bit at the top of the shirt) but then draw the bottom outline of the breast with absolutely no curve making it look essentially like she has no silly goose, in spite of the fact that the cleavage line makes it look like she has silly goose.

As far as beyond that, most of it is minor anatomical issues; one arm is thinner than the other, her hips are a tad narrow, here wrists are too skinny. little details like that.

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please be easy on the comments....


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 Post subject: Re: Loserfaces Art and stuff.....
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Not bad, but the face should be longer and we should see a little more of the arms.

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 Post subject: Re: Loserfaces Art and stuff.....
PostPosted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 8:51 pm 
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Easy with the comments?

Practice real anatomy!

You see? easy to understand, and the "!" make it more cleanr ;)

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Well, it's a start, keep it up.

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