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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 12:51 am 
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The left shoulder is basically broken, and seems to be hanging far off the side. That's fixable by moving the shoulder closer to the body. Also the rest of the arm seems odd to me, it might just be the wrinkle placement that is getting me, try wearing a jacket and see how the folds go in general, because they don't go straight down, it's more like coiling around the arm in a circular motion.
Also, either one of the legs is too big, or one of the legs is too small.
Another thing is the left hand, it seems flat, and the thumb way too far back on the hand, the fingers also seem to be in an odd form..I tried doing that with my hand, and I can say...it felt weird lol. Maybe if you tried another form, like the the pinky going inwards, and the index finger going outwards...etc.
Anyways, I did this if you don't mind.
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The face and the whole right side of the body looks p. good. Didn't spot anything there ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 7:34 am 
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The pictures, such pleassure to look at Error.
as for the last pic. Nicely notieced Gunzet.
I looked closely on that picture aswell. I figured something looked abit wacky, but i simply couldn't point it out :(

(Just a fast input sentence so I wont die :) ) Error. Try to make the boobs bigger! I'm sure it will be anatomicly correct! ;D

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 7:49 am 
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hey groovy stuff.. nice detail and such, need some work on anatomy though, for instance, i noticed some problems with the neck and head area with a lot of your sketches, the jaw juts out too far in a lot of cases causing the head to appear too far forward on the spine. the neck actually starts a few inches past the underside of the chin, you have it starting nearly at the back of the jaw.

Just a quick tip :)

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:44 am 
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Wow, last post in this thread... I'm extremly tired of my work, I found it awful and just crap, so I'm going to be working in that, until now I odn't think I'm going to post more in this thread.

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-Yeah I see the problem with the arm and neck, and I don't get whats about the boobs =S. (this I'm going to be working... also I want to be better with digital... I'm tired of everything I done looks like a mess, and my line work is awful -.-).

Well to finish this thread a last picture I'm working on (sketche).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 11:29 am 
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pretty much an awesome sketch, I already told you my criticism (freaking 2 hours of something you already knew =__=)

I think the expression is super cool btw

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
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Nice design on the armor :)


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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 7:38 pm 
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looks kinda flat and his neck is way long

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