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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ SwordMan! fini
PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:35 am 
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Looking good though I would have chosen a darker shade for the metal to accompany the red.

Wouldn't his sword fall out like that though?

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ SwordMan! New
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looking good clock, it turned out rad. I expect a background from you next time :P

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ SwordMan! fini
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Finally I can do clean lines in photshop!!!

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ New draw
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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New Draws (warni
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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New Draws (warni
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I burn with jealousy over the way you draw clothing. D:<

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New Draws (warni
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Clack is amazing at that shit. Accessorizing is like his forte, from what I've seen.


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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New Draws (warni
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Wow comments... I never though this day would come.

But thanks, I have a lot of references to draw cloth and everything (even soo, the references of common cloth is very useless, and only tell you where to make the cuts... but there is nothing really interesting =/).

@Sota: Man I believe I have other stuffs in what I'm good... I just upload anime stuffs here =/ (ask toast about my other kinds of works).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New Draws (warni
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All of it is really good but you should work on a shorter neck. But I like how you hid the long neck with the bandana you silly goose.


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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New Draws (warni
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Shorter neck checked (even so I like long necks).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
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Sword is curved ... wrong. Unless of course you meant it to be that way.

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
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Gotta, gotta love the detail. What else can I say? xD


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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
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I agree with Hamachi. The detail--the lines--the composition. All quite good.

On this latest one, his left shoulder/arm (our right) seems to me to be a bit too far out--the space between it and the body could be shortened a bit. At least I think. I'm pretty sure I saw Fate Stay Night with something similar.

This one's a bit of a stylistic preference, so I apologize if it's no help: your women look somewhat masculine--I mean, you can tell they're female immediately . . . and I don't know how to "fix" it. If it's just a style thing, then disregard this paragraph.

You're at a higher level then me, I believe. It's a little difficult to come up with a helpful critique. All in all, your art looks good. You've got anatomy down fairly well, too. *Wow, failed closing paragraph*


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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
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@Bacon: Is curbed like a Kukuri.
@Hamachi: thanks.
@Matt: Yeah, the left shoulder is a bit to far, because the idea was making a extended shoulder and the hands going to the back (yeah the effect doesn't show as should do it). And about the manlty womans, well nothing I can do, because I don't want to make a girly woman and i was searching something more like a badass punk girl who can kick ass (thats why I didn't gave her a cute body and one with a better physical constitution).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
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I Don't wanna sound silly goose but I think just a slightly longer neck like a median between your first and last. But other than that great detail good proportions and good style.


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