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 Post subject: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)~New sketche.
PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 10:05 pm 
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Welcome to my garbage thread, the place where critics are beyond goodness and suggestions (technicals or theoricals) are great too.

Ok I did this today and took my a day of cleaning (man, I truly don't understand how people can use photoshop soo fast -.-... for my cleaning something I did in photoshop take me days -.-).

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Yeah I know, the legs are too short for my taste =/ even soo I think the size of the legs was something added by the perspective =/ (I don't know).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!)
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Great muscles anatomy actually, but it's still a stiff picture. To really see how your anatomy is coming along is to try more interesting (harder) poses. And I think it's either the hands are too big, or the legs are too short.


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Iunno, I like the big hands.


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his neck too long or maybe he just doesn't have any trapezius muscle

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I think the problem are the hands.

And the problem with the muscles is because I forget to give volume to the clothe =/ and the shoudlers are too rects.

Also I clean awfuly the legs (I can see how the lines of the legs are a mess), and the shoes have different size in the legs. The lines are strogner in one eye and ear is slightly lower than the other =/.

Is just a mess >=/

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his neck too long or maybe he just doesn't have any trapezius muscle

This.


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Hehe yeah, males tend to have a slope down to the shoulders XP
The hands are diff lengths. The curve from the tip of the thumb to the index on left hand and right hand is diff ^^;

I think the lines are splendidly clean and really nicely done.
I've never had to go through the pain of cleaning lines (thank god XD). Sounds painful;;;

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Yeah I know... was a anatomy fail xD

Ok, new one.

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This armor make me look fat?

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He does look a bit fat, but not too much. Really great detail in it. Very good hands.

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ War Lord!!
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Really nice small details and a good design. Sort of looks like a bit of medieval time armor with Greek parts here and there.
His stomach seems to bulge out a bit...like he has beer belly though. Or maybe you just didn't scale his upper and lower body right. Because the upper body seems to be a little bigger than his legs.
The face/helmet seems skewed also. But that's just minor.

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ War Lord!!
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Thanks for the critics and comments.

And well, about the big belly/big upper body, that was something I was trying to do (its not a mistake the big belly, because I was thinking the armor as a composition of big plates and in the stomach there are more wide plates to give more movement).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ War Lord!!
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Yeah, I'm painting this swordman I did =/ I hope it end looking cool (for now I'm only showing it with a base of paint, after I finish that I'm going to start painting the details).

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ SwordMan! New
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I really like all of the colors, Clock! I would suggest using less red tones for the skin, though. More tan hues would make the skin look more realistic. That, and from the swatches I see now (I know this isn't the most recent version of the piece, though), it seems like you might want to consider using darker shades to make the skin appear more 3-dimensional.

Awesome job so far, though. :D


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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ SwordMan! New
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The wrinkles on his face make him look old.

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 Post subject: Re: Error 404 thread (critic me or die!!!!) ~ SwordMan! New
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Thanks. Ok, I finished the swordman! so take a good look and critics NOW! (also, Yeah I saw the color of the skin and I change it a little... is hard to look the skin color in this screen, because it tend to change the colors depending on where I see =/... but i hope it too look better).

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